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[PoT] Kibou, PG, Romance/Angst, FujiRyo

Feb 14, 2006 00:01

For aisutenshi.
30_kisses theme: #26 if only i could make you mine

Kibou
Prince of Tennis, FujiRyo, PG, 1024 words
Even the prodigies have their moments of doubt.

( If you wish hard enough... )

prince of tennis, #30_kisses, prince of tennis: fujiryo

Comments 33

_yukisuki February 14 2006, 06:21:43 UTC

Simply ♥

meiface February 15 2006, 21:25:51 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

jgal87 February 14 2006, 10:46:40 UTC

nice one

meiface February 15 2006, 21:26:11 UTC

Thank you! ^^.

forochel February 14 2006, 13:02:53 UTC

*wibbles*

Eeeeeee~ Good fic! I don't know why I say that since it's a given anyway but just. Good fic! ♥

This is the reason why you're Thrill Pair High Priestess,omg. The pull at my heartstrings at Fuji's jealousy and fallibility is just beautiful and I love how Ryoma handles it; how Ryoma knows Fuji so well. Fuji is susceptible to human emotions and feels all weird and heart-flip-floppy-but-not-the-dokidoki-kind as well! I love your Fuji! I love your Ryoma!

*showers love*

The ending is perfect, yes. AND AHAHAHAHAH. What kind of Hershey's kisses, though? :D

meiface February 15 2006, 21:30:10 UTC

Fuji is imperfect and fallible like the rest of the world; too human despite his brilliance, his uniqueness, etc. It was easy to write Fuji because it was all me. :/ But Ryoma is...well, Ryoma. He doesn't like to talk things out but he's perceptive enough (he can't help it, sometimes, despite all the jokes about him lacking social skills :O which he also does but is a different thing entirely from missing subtle nuances) to know when something's wrong. And he'll fix things in his own way. ♥ I've decided. :3 I may just love Ryoma a lot though.

Hershey's kisses with white and milk striped chocolate! ::eats one::

forochel February 17 2006, 13:29:48 UTC

But everyone puts bits of themselves into their characters, and Fuji still felt Fuji, so. That either means that you're like Fuji or you underestimate yourself. -is rather inclined to the latter option because the former is too scary to contemplate- I love his way. Fweee~

White and milk striped chocolate?! WE DON'T GET THAT HERE.

meiface February 18 2006, 16:35:14 UTC

It's very delicious chocolate, ohoho yes. ♥

Me = Fuji omg. :O Where's my Ryoma?

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meiface February 15 2006, 21:34:54 UTC

Well, aisutenshi wanted a little angst before the romance and so I delivered. I do like angst though--there is much beauty in pain. And that sounded really bad but, um, I didn't mean it in a sadistic or masochistic way, really. Fuji! Ryoma! Be distracted. :D

Poor Fuji. ::hugs:: Ryoma loves him though, so that's okay. (Though I was a bit worried about making Fuji too ooc in this; too girly and weak and uke but hey...creative license, right? ::shifty look:: Which is really hypocritical of me because I hate all TezuFuji fics where Fuji is characterized as such a girl. Ahem.)

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meiface February 17 2006, 01:18:42 UTC

I swear it's easier to write angst than in-character humor or romance, which is really weird. >.<;; But we should try all genres, right...? Saa.

(Thanks! I love the idea of possessiveness too. Which might explain why it's worked into my fics so often. XD)

sparkly_mangos February 15 2006, 00:12:07 UTC

Awww, just so perfect for today! My love for this pairing is revitalizing with every one of your drabbles! =D

meiface February 15 2006, 21:35:28 UTC

I'm glad to hear that! ::waves FujiRyo flags in your direction::