New fic: Sick Day

Apr 24, 2010 17:56

Title: Sick Day
Pairing: sort of Andy/Miranda
Rating: G
Notes: the prompt came courtesy of pin_drop--laryngitis. This isn’t quite that, but it’s close enough to count. Thanks, pin_drop !

This may or may not be the first of a few random scenes that will not be a part of a larger story. I just need something to get my brain back into gear. Thanks to xander, who took a ( Read more... )

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mayireadtoday April 25 2010, 01:20:54 UTC
I like this line (I know what it means thanks to Project Runway.): “Nah, we’re even. Let’s get a coffee at the tents in a few weeks. If either of us have the time, that is,” Nathalie says."

Very interesting: “I’m very bossy every day. Just not to you,”

Cool and a little sad. That's ok, I'll just pretend this is a prequel to "By Heart"

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chilly_flame April 26 2010, 03:42:16 UTC
That's a sweet thought--this could very well be the prequel to that story. It fits, doesn't it! Thanks so much for the kind words, I'm glad you liked.

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la_fono April 25 2010, 01:29:25 UTC
“I’m very bossy every day. Just not to you,”

*big smile* This exchange is kind of the crux of it all, isn't it? Andy getting her awesome on and getting up the guts to talk to Miranda as an equal. Lovely stuff, nicely characterised.

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chilly_flame April 26 2010, 03:42:43 UTC
I had no idea that was the line that would be such a hit, but I'm glad I left it in. :D Thanks so much.

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punky_96 April 25 2010, 01:59:09 UTC
What a wonderful vignette. More of these little scenes would be lovely. Thanks for sharing.

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chilly_flame April 26 2010, 03:43:05 UTC
I hope to get to another one in the near future--thanks very much!

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mxrolkr April 25 2010, 02:15:14 UTC
What a wonderful glimpse at what caring relationship between them would be. Something built on friendship and honest concern for the other person. I agree, more of these would be a wonderful way to show a growing relationship.
Thanks for it!

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chilly_flame April 26 2010, 03:43:50 UTC
Thanks for the lovely compliments. They would be so good together, once Miranda's able to open her mouth at least. :D We shall see!

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tanama30 April 25 2010, 03:16:59 UTC
i really like this fic i hope there will be another part to it. i love the bosy comment by andy priceless. i really hope there is more. let us know

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chilly_flame April 26 2010, 03:44:18 UTC
Thanks so much. I know there will be another short story--not sure if it will follow this one, but we'll see. I appreciate the kind words!

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