Comments | chilly_flame: New fic: Score, Andy/Miranda

chilly_flame

New fic: Score, Andy/Miranda

Feb 26, 2010 18:54

Title: Score
Rating: M
Author: chilly_flame
Fandom: Devil Wears Prada
Pairing: Andy/Miranda
Disclaimer: I don’t own anything associated with the Devil Wears Prada. It’s tragic.

Notes: Oh well, it's another porn battle entry. The DWP offerings seemed slim so I’m throwing my hat into the ring at the very last minute.

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( The prompt: red ink )

score, porn battle

Comments 54

kdsusa3 February 27 2010, 03:35:06 UTC

Nice...very nice. Loved it.

chilly_flame February 28 2010, 20:20:38 UTC

Thank you so much!

law_nerd February 27 2010, 03:39:48 UTC

Wings... neat!

Yummy hot fic, perfect treat for a cold Friday night. Thanks!

chilly_flame February 28 2010, 20:20:54 UTC

Hee, glad I could be of service! Thanks.

cstotts1 February 27 2010, 03:40:40 UTC

..... oh holy ........

that was some beautiful erotica

chilly_flame February 28 2010, 20:21:08 UTC

Thanks so much! I appreciate it.

pure_ecstasy6 February 27 2010, 03:41:19 UTC

I liked this alot. Was beautiful =)

chilly_flame February 28 2010, 20:21:17 UTC

Thanks very much!

pin_drop February 27 2010, 04:04:34 UTC

This is so sexy. Of course Miranda would have to draw it on Andy's back, where she couldn't see it right away! More than just that Miranda obviously finds A beautiful, it's clear that she's responding to her question (“I want to be the best,” Andy says. “Am I?”). Very well-played.

I also like that they're both so isolated from everyone but each other -- Nate and Stephen are gone, Nigel's avoiding M (and Andy by association, one would assume), Emily and the rest of the staff all seem about to get fired. It gives the whole thing a flavour of "everyone wants to be us." They also seem sort of strangely distant from each other (It might be the closest they’ve ever been... Their kiss is soft, which suits Andy since it’s the first of the night), which just adds another layer to it. These are two very different people with distinct personalities and interests, and their mutual attraction doesn't change that. Very canonical, and very cool.

chilly_flame February 28 2010, 20:24:37 UTC

You're very right on with the "everyone wants to be us," and I hadn't even realized I'd done it. (It's always great when comments reveal things about stories that the author doesn't consider when they write.) But the distance between them was absolutely intended, since they might be having sex, but the intimacy is unusual. And who knows where it will lead? For this version of the pair, it seems like it might be something just to help them both get through, rather than leading to "true love." And that's enough.

Thank you!