Help, flist, you're my only hope

[chiiyo86]

As some of you may have noticed, big bang schedule is up. My own date is super early since I'm going on June 10, during the first week of posting. Meep! Last week I asked if someone was willing to have a look at my fic and give their opinion on it, especially on plot, characterization, world building. More on the fic here.

I know everyone is busy, that the fic is long (35,000 words), and there isn't much time left before June 10. If anyone can help, I would really appreciate it.