Comments | chichuri: Fic: Chain You Down (Peter, Olivia, Nick) (1/5)

chichuri

Fic: Chain You Down (Peter, Olivia, Nick) (1/5)

Sep 09, 2009 19:12

Title: Chain You Down (1/5)
Fandom: Fringe
Author: chichuri
Characters: Peter, Olivia, Nick
Word Count: 4060
Rating: R
Summary: After five years on the run, Peter is caught by the ZFT and reintroduced to Olivia and Nick. AU.
Warnings: Swearing, violence
Spoilers: Season 1
Disclaimer: I don't own Fringe or its characters.
Author's Note: Very AU. Prequel to ( Read more... )

fringe, fringe: choke chain 'verse

Comments 7

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chichuri September 10 2009, 05:12:21 UTC

Heh. I've been working on this story since May; Choke Chain 'verse kinda took over my brain. Glad you're enjoying it!

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chichuri September 10 2009, 18:34:01 UTC

Oh, thanks so much! You've just given me two of the most awesome things someone can tell me: that they usually never comment but are doing so, and that they read something multiple times and still love it. I'm delighted you enjoy "Choke Chain" so much, and I hope "Chain You Down" lives up to it!

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chichuri September 10 2009, 18:39:25 UTC

I'm still glad you love it! And aren't you happy you got to read the whole thing in one sitting, rather than waiting for me to finish editing chapters and post?

muselives September 17 2009, 18:15:44 UTC

I waited until I saw all five parts to start reading but damn I've been excited for you to post this. I know this is a fic that I'm going to have to read and reread but I wanted to comment my first time through. I'm so psyched you got them all up before the premiere. Love, love, love your Jones. And your Peter but that's nothing new ;) Off to the next part!

chichuri September 18 2009, 04:13:29 UTC

Heh. I'm just excited that I'm done with it, and I don't have to edit anymore. Sorry to take so long to post; I decided I didn't want to edit more than one chapter a day, and if I didn't post, I knew I'd keep tinkering.

Glad you like my Peter. And I love Jones, I so hope we see an alternate version of him.

sugangel7 February 10 2010, 19:01:22 UTC

I'm so excited about this!!! Gah, there are so many things I love.

First, you've just contrived such an intricate plot that I see fitting well into the Fringe universe. I LOVED that Walter tried to get Peter out once his own son's life was threatened and that he'd buried the memories so Peter wouldn't have to deal with them. I can SO see that happening.

It also makes a terrible amount of sense why Peter ended up being partnered with Olivia. You picked up on a part of the pairing of the kids that I hadn't remembered at first, the fact that their partnering was supposed to provide stability and that stability should technically go both ways. So I can see how Nick couldn't provide the same amount of support to Olivia, so Peter was brought in. That's too cool ( ... )