[EPILOGUE] Never Kiss a Sergeant and Walk Away

May 12, 2010 22:17


Title: A Distance of Seven Inches - Epilogue/ Never Kiss a Sergeant and Walk Away (Because she'll hunt you down.)

Author: Me, myself and I.

Genre: Humour/Romance. Analysis because Lightning is a robot, lol.

Characters/Pairings: HopexLightning + their posse. More of Lightning’s POV this time.

Ratings/Warnings: PG, though mild swearing.

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hope, fanfiction, final fantasy xiii, lightning, distance

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ruinedheaven May 14 2010, 05:03:17 UTC

Ok, I finally found the time for long review. First of.

I love the title. And, now it has spawned a Light x Hope fanfic idea which I'm currently fending off with a twenty-foot pole. I'm trying to finish my other writing project first before I embark on new ones.

I adored Lightning's thought session. That ceiling fan got a lot of love. x3 Her habit of repeating lines was hilarious; I almost choked on my coke the first time I read it.

I agree totally. Hope = Sheep. Funnily, I always kept thinking of Lightning as more of the wolf who ran off with said sheep then a sheep dog ... and now, that analogy shall never leave me. Incidentally, spawned another fanfic idea. o_o Your stuff is deadly.

I share your addiction with Pixiv. I randomly picture Hope as either a chick, a puppy or a sheep. However, the sheep reference wins out most of the time, especially with your description. Priceless and utterly apt.

Oh, and yes. The poor doorbell; however, I'm not as sympathetic as I should be. x3 The amusement I gained from the imagery rather offset my empathy. ^^

I love the entire conversation they had. And, the recollection of all of Hope's awkward moments made me cringe and snicker alternately. I loved Lightning's remark in regards to his "If we have kids, problem solved." comment. That is exactly as I expected Lightning to react.

Yes. Sazh, Fang, Snow, Serah and Vanille = Cockblockers. Though, I'm not sure who they're unintentionally blocking. xD Hope and his still dangerous hormones or Lightning and her newly acknowledged ones. :3

The Omake. That one deserves special love. xD And the ending line was perfect. I can just see Lightning reverting to her old 'herding' attitude alongside her romantic feelings. I'm rather sad this ended. It had so many highlights and moments. However, with the fact you have more planned... ^^v

Actually, this deserves a sequel. I mean, sure, he got the girl. Now what? Where exactly does Hope stand? And, just what exactly does it entail being romantically involved with Lightning Farron? I'm dying to know. Just a friendly (hopeful. Yes, pun included) fanfic suggestion.

In closing, thank you so very much for writing and sharing this little treasure. I had an immensely good time reading. As always, I look forward to more of your posts!

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chibimeringue May 14 2010, 11:06:25 UTC
Ahaha, was it really so poisonous? xD Your review makes me so happy though, thank you so much for taking the time to write it out!

Ah, I've lost many hours in a day to Pixiv. And yes! Hope is definitely a very small, cute animal. One you just . . . just wanna hug. <333

Hmm. . . a sequel doesn't sound too bad, actually. I've had a terrible ache in my teeth to do something about their first date or something to that effect. Hmmm. . . I think you've spawned another idea in me for this! xD

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