The Best Gift
[Fic] The Best Gift I was not good at waiting. Never have been, especially when it came to waiting for people. Waiting for him. Perhaps there was a large part of me that thought he wouldn't show up. Maybe he'd forgotten about the date. Or decided to go out with friends.
Because that's what Yasuda was ( Read more... )
I'm sorry, this could be the only constructive reaction you could get out of me after reading this little treasure.
Seriously? Are you human? How am I supposed to write something after having read this?? I mean, I'm going to write a sentence, look at it, remember your text, and end up crying crying in my bed like "I THOUGHT I WAS GOOOOOOOOD". Reading is BAD for me. Seriously.
Anyway. I really liked your One Shot! I'm wandering if I even prefer reading in English than in French. I thnik I do. Your way of writing is very good! I liked the story! And the rain, even though it's very "cliché". Yasu is sooooo sweet! But the impression he left me is "transparent". Subaru's is "tortured". Don't ask me from where it comes from. But even if Yasu is here, I don't know, I kind of got the impression he really is lonely.
Concerning the sex scene... how about summing things up with a single word "nosebleed"? Except one moment. I guess it's a nervous tic. I mean, I saw the word "sloppy" and it was the end of it. I started laughing like crazy, and now, whenever I imagine Subassan sex, I can only imagine yasu as a cleaning broomstick. I have no idea why. But, honestly, it was great!
I don't regret coming and reading this, thanks for the great time you made me spend! But now, back to work u_u
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