On a Short Leash

[chiarahhue]

Title: On a Short Leash
Author: chiarahhue
Rating: NC17 for graphic sex and mild consensual bondage
Disclaimer: I do not own Stargate: Atlantis or any of the characters. They belong to MGM. I'm just borrowing them for a little while.
Summary: It’s a PWP so if you’re looking for plot and substance, move along - there’s nothing for you here!
Notes: Beta’d,

Comments

[wanderingsmith]

cupcake oil, (snort)
me and my hand and wristbands!!! OMG
love that it's not all simple and easy. that there is some adult conversation happening.
purring!! awwwwww, melty goo
screaming John! (VVEG)
and I so want the epilogue of the visit to carson!! (begging puppy eyes) just a little funny quicky?

loved the interaction, and the charcters, and the humour you inject so easily. and then that was just so hot and tender and loving and... I'm outa words... just write more! and yes, I *do* nag....(eg)

[chiarahhue]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the finished product!

And take credit yourself - your beta'ing is responsible in a big way for how well it turned out. Your prompting...nagging...beta'ing...nagging...great comments...nagging. And did I mention nagging? ;-)

And I'm particularly glad you liked the conversation as much as the smut :-) I think that's what really makes it Sparky - a little humor and tenderness with the hotness.

And yes...there is a visit to the infirmary in the works...

[wanderingsmith]

yes, adults having a relationship which includes sex is what most of us really want in the end...

eheh, (clears throat) nag! yay for infirmary coming! sigh for holiday coming.

[anuna_81]

Damn it! This is HOT! I never get tired of Sparky - creative - in - bed fics. Especially if its John who gets to be tortured.

I think we need Puppy!John appreciation society or something. Write more!