CSU: This Time Around (Chapter 1)

Jun 06, 2009 22:44

CSU: This Time Around - Chapter 1
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micah88 June 9 2009, 09:46:37 UTC
I was getting the 'angsty' feel as I read and then this line happened:
'JunSu's hair stood up when he noticed the profiler winked at him.'
LOL! I had to laugh at that. Greasy Chun.
I've always loved mysteries. Can't wait to read more of this!

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chevyportia June 9 2009, 09:55:01 UTC
I wanted to slid some humour in somewhere in between. Guess I did place at the right location. And you...oh, I'm reading your fiction too but you post so fast, you scared me. And just when I waut for the next message to come in my inbox, you stopped updating. You are like machine. I envy you!

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micah88 June 9 2009, 09:59:38 UTC
Right location indeed. Just don't slip in a part to make me laugh when I should be grossing out over mutilated body parts (hopefully not Junsu's mutilation of Yoochun...)
I post once a week...that's not fast. I hope you won't be doing that for this fic. Slow updates are more dangerous when the story happens to be a mystery fic. Lol. (It's dangerous b/c there will be ppl *ahem* me *ahem* coming after you for not updating. :D)

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chevyportia June 9 2009, 10:07:51 UTC
Oh...well I post this in another website and I must say they said the same thing although most of them are here, they didn't fail to show me some gruesome attitude so I could post fast. Not that I don't want to. I can't wait to actually post the next chapter but I want here and there to run concurrently. That's why I waited. Took me some time to explain to them. So, I already got the story out but I'm waiting for more readers so I could post more. I'm kind of hungry for more of these genre kind of readers because I took a lot of time to research. I'm coming up with another mystery ones, I think better to postpone it first. I don't want to die yet.

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chloe1910 June 9 2009, 11:30:09 UTC
ah..what an interesting start..I think they have quite an impressive and interesting emsemble of people for CSU huh?

Look forward to the updates.

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chevyportia June 9 2009, 11:32:37 UTC
Only the young selected ones placed there. Geniuses!!! Thanks for reading!

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chevyportia June 9 2009, 11:39:58 UTC
I really must pray hard that you will come back fot the next one and say something good because now, I'm getting really scared for making any mistakes. On the other hand, I feel flattered to have caught your attention. Thanks for reading!

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purpleinpink June 9 2009, 12:16:52 UTC
Waah so many comments already!^^
Another new story :)
Just at the beginning and Yoochun is going greasily flirty already LOL. I like! :D
And I find Yunho very intriguing too. Looking forward this as well!

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chevyportia June 9 2009, 12:23:42 UTC
Too many comments also not good, especially this subject. Even scarier than seeing a ghost. If you want to know, I have actually 10 stories under me right now. I didn't put it all here, maybe I will one day. Oh, well, you know YooChun...that greasy yet dorky guy. Thanks!

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purpleinpink June 9 2009, 12:29:16 UTC
Oh it's OK, you can go at your own pace, I'm just gonna stalk your journal anytime LOL (hope I dont scare you >.<)
And your intro to the case was good too :)
just dont make me fall in love with Yunho OK?

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chevyportia June 9 2009, 20:22:48 UTC
No, you don't scare me. I find it flattering!

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sospasteeq June 9 2009, 12:20:43 UTC
it's you!
*points and waves*
i just finished replying
to the fic, and now you have
a new one! i think i'm naturally
attracted to your storylines. yay me!

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chevyportia June 9 2009, 12:25:37 UTC
To be honest, I have 10 fictions under my belt. I just hope all you readers will love it because I'm getting scared now. Afraid of so many things.

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sospasteeq June 9 2009, 13:13:59 UTC
awww...
don't worry.
just take your
time, and everything
will work out just fine(=

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