Take Me to Lovers Lane, Make Me Yours

[chestexplosion]

“I want to run my fingers thru your hair.
My whole life would pass and I wouldn't even care.

Just gotta touch you and squeeze you, and make you mine
I want to hold you til the end of time.

Lovers lane, lovers lane
I wanna go, I wanna go to lovers lane”
-Hunx and His Punx “Lovers Lane”Genre: College!au oneshot

Comments

[latinaeinstein]

i reread this because i thought i hadn't
and it's like it was brandnew in my head so i'm gonna leave a longer comment because it deserves it

sooooooooooo

oh my god minseok is so precious in this
like oh my god that line about how he's so lonely and sad even though he wants to be happy for baekyeol. my darling baby, it's okay. the one you pine for pines in turn

and okay xiuhan, the xiuhAN IS SO VERY PRECIOUS TOO
like oh god the fact that there's all this sexual tension and release, but still tenderness and genuine infatuation
oh i like my sex acts with feelings and this has it and i'm ;;
i love that it's like let's grind on each other in a club and dry hump too but like we also really like each other and like let's get out of here, but not just for sex and not just a one time thing. let's chill on my bed and eat special occasion pizza and drink gatorade and have tickle fights and okay yeah let's make out a little bit and yeah okay handjob. but let's be boyfriends after this, okay.

and yeah i commented on the sex scene last time, too, but i missed this line
Minseok wanted Luhan to remember this night on his skin.

and to reiterate like my sex with feelings and wow they have feelings ;; and post handjob cuddles are so a+

and the baby resolution of like yeah let's be boyfriends. we already made clear how we felt about each other last night and minseok getting all happy about it and like
“I”m allowed to bring you coffee in the library? And make you study with me? And kiss you when I can’t help but swallow the beautiful intelligence that comes out of your mouth?”
why is this what he wants??? he's so fucking precious, i'm gonna throw up

they're such boyfriends
i love their love ;;

[chestexplosion]

aahhhhhhhhh i honestly don't like this fic as much mostly bc it was my first attempt at romance &&& sex but i look at it now and i'm proud

also xiuhan's so precious and dear to my heart that i don't like one sidedness and i think min would be just as in love and i like cute and sweet and soft loving

pero like muchisimas gracias for commenting again ^^