[Fic] Last to Know - The Gazette - Reita x Ruki - o12/?

Jul 28, 2008 17:20

Title:Last to Know
Chapters: 12/?
Author:cherryrazor and neopollyGenre:angst/romance, smut ( Read more... )

last to know, reitaxruki, fic

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sabersenshi July 28 2008, 23:45:39 UTC
*cackles insanely*
OH.MY.GazettE!!!
This chapter is totally nutz! I love it!!!
What you two just did...
*squeals*
*flails*
I would love to see that particular expression on Reita's face..the mix between a kicked and overjoyed puppy..that is just so....CUTE.
The texting between Kai and Naoko..WIN! Total and Complete WIN!
Tho I think she's making a mistake in NOT telling Reita...but then, that's just me and my feelings about honesty and trust in relationships.
Tho I do see the plot possabilities here: By not telling him it leaves the door open for her to feel guilty..as she thinks more on Kai's soft lips and hidden muscles. But if she'd told Reita there could've been a different kind of angst. The whole "SEE? Somebody else wants me. I don't really need you" bit, kinda like Naoko going -Nya Nya- at him as well as him wondering if she was thinking about Kai when he kisses her.

But thru it all...I feel sorriest for both Ruki and Hayate. They both love someone that doesn't love them back..or at least not enough or in the right way. *smacks Reita* <-- just for the fun of it. I stuill love him to peices. ALL of his pieces *wiggles eyebrows*
Oh, and I love both of you for this story, too. *hugs*

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cherryrazor July 29 2008, 08:16:44 UTC
*glomps you*
Saber!
Yay! Glad you thought so 'cause we sure didn't. We weren't really satisfied with this chapter.

I'd love to see that expression on his face too. I bet neopolly would too.
I had a great time writing the text message bit. Kai and Naoko muses made me write it. Kai was threatening me with his drumsticks :'(
I think Naoko should have fessed up too, but she didn't. I guess she thinks that it's no big deal after what Reita did to her. It really would have been interesting to see what Reita would have thought if he knew what happened.

I feel terrible for Ruki and Hayate too. Reita deserves a little smacking around for what he did and for not realizing it.
I'm sure you do ;p

Awww! We love you too! *hugs back* ♥ ♥

Thank you sooo much for the comment! It made my morning^____^

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