Yes Heero's pretty hopeless already. I wanted it that way as it is more often Duo who's suffering in blind lust or helpless love. And do not fear I am working to make Duo's reaction priceless. I'll try to not disappoint.
I appear to be on a roll right now and further updates should follow. I hope this vein of inspiration won't dry too soon because I get lazy when I am uninspired.
Lovely chapter! I just have one little thing, did they have crayons back then? I mean if they didn't then how would Heero know what a crayon was.. try a different metaphor... but if you like that one leave it, I dun car, just saying.
I'm going to read the fith chapter now and I can hardly wait!
It's funny you should noticed that because I purposely didn't use "the brightest bulb in the box" for fear of anachronism. Now I wonder if crayons existed as well. You should take responsibility and are entitled to help me choose between the new ones I came up with, and they are even sort of in tone with the fic. ^^
- the brightest jewel in the chest - the brightest feather on the parrot - the smartest suit in the wardrobe - the sharpest knife in the carcass/dead guy/soldier - the deepest abyss in the sea
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I appear to be on a roll right now and further updates should follow. I hope this vein of inspiration won't dry too soon because I get lazy when I am uninspired.
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I'm going to read the fith chapter now and I can hardly wait!
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- the brightest jewel in the chest
- the brightest feather on the parrot
- the smartest suit in the wardrobe
- the sharpest knife in the carcass/dead guy/soldier
- the deepest abyss in the sea
Now what gives? :P
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^^;
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