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[Fanfic] The Wicked [Chapter 5]

Mar 28, 2010 21:43

Title: The Wicked [Chapter 5]

Rating: T

Warnings: AU, slight OOC, and as it's a semi-musical based on a not so very popular broadway musical, it can be confusing.

Summary: The Citizens of Deimon are celebrating the death of a man they deemed Wicked. But is there more to it than what it seems? Could something bigger had happened behind the scenes ( Read more... )

pairing: senasuzu, fandom: eyeshield 21, pairing: hirumamo, the wicked

Comments 20

kelscium March 28 2010, 20:58:35 UTC

yay! did i actually beat bar_ohki to commenting? haha

those jerks... it's sad that that actually does happen to people (one person making an assumption and the others instantly agreeing with it and taking it as a fact...)

anyway can't wait to see how that ends up ^_^

don't worry about getting chapters out quickly. take your time haha that's what i'm doing.. =] but i still can't wait for the next chapter

bar_ohki March 29 2010, 05:02:08 UTC

>< I was busy!

cherry_tiger March 29 2010, 08:20:05 UTC

*cues the "You-know-you're-a-BNF when..." line* XD

bar_ohki March 29 2010, 14:48:36 UTC

Yes, I am an Eyesheild 21, HiruMamo, BNF. XD

Though kelscium is also my friend. Which adds a different level of amusement there.

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bar_ohki March 29 2010, 05:01:34 UTC

So Agon turned the guy into a gorilla, beat him up in front of everyone to increase his 'status' with them and has plans for Mamori. Well I'm REALLY liking the development ~!

cherry_tiger March 29 2010, 08:18:02 UTC

Yay! Shows that I'm on the right track so far! ^^ Cause a lot's going to happen soon, so if you like this then that's good!

bar_ohki March 29 2010, 14:46:50 UTC

I can't say I was expecting Agon to have the ability to do that to people, but it does make sense. After all, they are attending a magical university. Does Mamori have magical powers too?

cherry_tiger March 29 2010, 14:53:48 UTC

Yeah, there's a reason why I set this in a magical college. And about Mamori having magical powers, I'll actually explain this in the next chapter. All I can say for now is that everyone who attends this college has some form of magical power, some are strong and useful, some are weak and pretty much useless.

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honey_bee89 May 1 2010, 18:55:28 UTC

Yay! Hiruma to the rescue! He really does care. =') And it was nice of Monta to defend Mamori like that, though it caused more trouble in the long run. I mean poor Hiruma is getting the blame for something he didn't even do! I hate that he is being isolated because of his looks. If anyone is guilty of anything here, it's that stupid crowd for jumping to stupid assumptions. People like that are so... ugh.

Good job on the chapter! =D