[Fanfic] Remember [Chapter 16]

[cherry_tiger]

Title: Remember [Chapter 16] - FINAL

Rating: T

Fandom: Eyeshield 21/CLAMP (Crossover)

Disclaimers: I do not own any of the characters used here. They belong to their respective owners, namely Riichiro Inagaki and Yuusuke Murata for Eyeshield 21 and CLAMP.

Summary: In a volatile world where even his black book holds no power, Hiruma must help

Comments

[siyaaphenan]

Wow... It is end. I have a mix of feelings inside me. A joy, something warm and even a little sad. I was reading this fanfic for a few days. It was so breathtaking. I’m hard to choose words.
I really like your writing style. Your fanfics is so easy for reading. I think, you are refining your writing style. “Remember” is so complete, deep and considered. It’s cool. Really.
I say it again - I admire your fantasy.
You created so interesting situation. This is a way to show Mamori and Hiruma on the other hand. You used various memories and this allows see heroes deeper.
I like plot move when hero lose his memory but show his true personality even without it. Link of dreams, subconsciousness and reality is so interesting too. I like such things very much. You really coped with it very well.
The final even force me to shed a tear. Truly. It’s full of fun, feeling of completion and light sorrow.
In my opinion you were fighting with difficulties in your life at the same time personages of your story were passing through their problems. I mean, I feel such link. Of course I can wrong, but... Sorry, if I said something strange.
I really glad for you and congratulate you again with completing this work.

[cherry_tiger]

I am completely honoured by this wonderful review of yours. While looking back, I feel like I could have written this better, it's good to know that this fic has shown that I have progressed with my writing... and that I am capable of writing fantasy, especially. It's my favourite kind of story to write, and I am glad to see I managed to adapt HiruMamo well in this world.

Actually, you are right. This fic is a reflection of my own struggles, and I often felt as if I was fighting alongside Mamori as well. I'm attached to this fic cause it has bits of my personality in it, which is why I'm quite fond of it. And I am glad that despite it being personal, you have managed to enjoy it in your own way. Stories of lost memories and struggling to find what has been lost is definitely my favourite kind of story too, cause it shows you how much you've grown and how far you can go.

Thank you again for your wonderful review. It has been a pleasure to write this fic and it means a lot to know that you've enjoyed it!

[siyaaphenan]

Oh, you are welcome)
And I have concluded already from my experience that writer fulfils himself through his works. Thanks to his own works writer will learn something new and reconsider some old knowledge together with personages of his stories. It is really exciting me. I like writing very-very much and dream that one day I will finish my own story the name "Reflection"...

[cherry_tiger]

You're right, a writer's experience really influences the kind of story they write, and regardless of what they say, there are always elements of themselves in their stories. I'm glad that you enjoy writing too! I also have an original story I'd love to work on and finish someday... I hope you'll be able to finish your story too!