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[Fanfic] Wait For Me [Chapter 2]

Oct 11, 2011 23:00

Title: Wait For Me [Chapter 2]

Rating: T

Disclaimers: I do not own any of the characters used here. They belong to their respective owners, namely the creators of Eyeshield 21.

Summary: A sequel to my earlier fic, Gravity. Time is moving faster than before, and one question will be on the mind's of both Hiruma and Mamori. How long is too long ( Read more... )

fandom: eyeshield 21, fanfic, pairing: hirumamo, wait for me

Comments 6

dayofcaligula October 12 2011, 15:52:38 UTC

I love this twist! Really, really do... wonder where'd Yamato get into the story though. I also want to see possessive/jealous!Hiruma in a dark way, ha ha.

So Agon here was being concerned about Hiruma and Mamori? (Does this have something to do with his new-found brotherly love to Karin or anyone whom he doesn't consider too much of a trash? Oh, my Unsui/Karin shipping tendencies are all over.)

cherry_tiger October 13 2011, 02:32:40 UTC

I'm so glad to hear you like this twist! Cause this will be the crux of what will happen in the next few chapters. Yamato will come in soon enough, and as for possesive/jealous!Hiruma... Heh. You'll just have to wait and see on that one. XD

Actually, yes, he was concerned about them both! I'm glad you could pick up on that. I realize that Agon came off as a huge jerk here, but I really think it's his style to confront Hiruma this way. It'll become more apparent later on though. Admittedly, what Agon does isn't openly linked to Unsui/Karin, but it will be touched upon lightly in the next chapter... where, if all goes well, Unsui/Karin will happen in the next chapter. Pray that I write it well enough!

dayofcaligula October 13 2011, 14:41:03 UTC

... where, if all goes well, Unsui/Karin will happen in the next chapter.

THIS. PLEASE! I am already summoning the gods, you see.

P.S. Please don't bother my fanservice demand. But thank you for reading Unsui/Karin! I'm writing about them mainly for myself, but I find it fulfilling when other people appreciate the pairing that I completely love to bits.

cherry_tiger October 14 2011, 06:29:37 UTC

Oh, don't worry about it at all. I seriously enjoyed your Unsui/Karin fics! They came out so natural that you totally convinced me the two of them have chemistry. It's really well written, and I hope I can do the same for them in the next chapter. ^^

immortalizepain October 14 2011, 03:00:33 UTC

this is also going to be a good read judging from how the plot unfolds. This one is really different from the Gravity fic you previously wrote. This one has a lot of mature and dark plots clearly showing how the two matured in the previous years they had in Saikyoudai. And the inner conflicts, really like the way you wrote them.

Hmmm, i can see that Yamato is going to be a potential love interest of Mamori but since I know that this is a Hirumamo fic I'm so relieved that the two would still definitely end up together despite the odds they are going to face. That journey would certainly be an interesting one judging from your writing skills, making this as one of your epic works.

Looking forward to the next chapter. ^^

cherry_tiger October 14 2011, 06:27:44 UTC

I wrote a teaser for dayofcaligula for this fic here, so it'll also help key you in on what might be coming up in this fic. Overall, yes, this fic will be a lot darker than Gravity because this will really test whether or not waiting was the right thing to do for both Hiruma and Mamori.

Yamato's existence will help cement that decision in for Mamori as he represents another path laid out before her... You'll see more of him soon enough for sure. ^^

Thanks! I'm really glad you're enjoying my fics!