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[Fanfic] Remember [Chapter 4]

Jan 14, 2011 16:35

Title: Remember [Chapter 4]

Rating: T (Yes, I brought the rating down)

Fandom: Eyeshield 21/CLAMP (Crossover)

Disclaimers: I do not own any of the characters used here. They belong to their respective owners, namely Riichiro Inagaki and Yuusuke Murata for Eyeshield 21 and CLAMP.

Summary: Anezaki Mamori wakes up to realize that she has been ( Read more... )

fandom: clamp, fandom: eyeshield 21, fanfic, pairing: hirumamo, remember

Comments 23

bar_ohki January 15 2011, 00:47:06 UTC

Oh very nice. I like how you're slowly giving Mamori information. I think we all know that Hiruma is based on someone she actually knows, but she doesn't know that. XD

cherry_tiger January 16 2011, 02:45:39 UTC

Haha! It's a little bit more complicated than that. Let's just say Hiruma's not telling the whole truth with who he really is in this realm. But I'm glad you're enjoying this so far!

bar_ohki January 16 2011, 02:46:32 UTC

That's just like him. ^_~

siyaaphenan October 20 2011, 14:25:52 UTC

I was really glad to find this crossover! *_* You are genious! Very, very interesting situation for Mamori and Hiruma... I like it!

And as I saw a word combination "she marched on" in this chapter as OneRepublic "Marching on" come to my mind... I think this song is suiting to this chapter, and what are you thinking about it? =)

cherry_tiger October 21 2011, 06:42:09 UTC

I'm so glad you're enjoying this! I'm not much of a genius, this fic isn't as popular as the others I've written. But I'm always glad to see this fic being appreciated!

And I checked out the song you mentioned and wow, you're right! It totally suits this chapter as well as other moments that occur whenever they're about to face an obstacle! Thank you so much for sharing! ^^

siyaaphenan October 21 2011, 08:41:25 UTC

I like a story like this. And I love Tsubasa =) These circumstances are you created for Mamori and Hiruma are very unusual. I mean, we can observe how they will behave in this situation, that so differs for their usual reality. Their relationship can transform and turn into something other.

I'm happy that you think so ^^ I like to associate songs with stories. It helps with inspiration and you look more deeply at some moments.

cherry_tiger October 21 2011, 09:45:21 UTC

I'm glad! Yeah, their relationship will be different from what we see in the mangas or animes and you'll find out why somewhere when I reach the end.

And I LOVE music, they inspire a heck load for me. Like for this fic, I've been planning it for a long while but what really got me to finally write it all down was thanks to My Chemical Romance's "The Only Hope For Me Is You" which suited the theme I had for this fic. Feel free to recommned more songs! I really enjoy them!

siyaaphenan October 21 2011, 15:33:21 UTC

I'll be waiting chapter 8 ^^

I wanted to write something not very usual about HiruMamo for a long time and I've written it in august. In this fic Hiruma is a cat and Mamori helps him turn into a human. Maybe that is a trivial plot but I enjoyed to write about this couple in these circumstances . I've placed they in this situation and observed how they coped with it. When you know characters quite well, it's so amusing to watch how they literally live in text. Em... I'm sorry for that offtopic.

I would like to recommend you one of my favorites russian sites. It's The Project - Night DJ. http://karipov.ru/music.php There are many good songs in different languages on this site for listening in the evenings and nights. I think you will understand the navigation of this site. If you wouldn't, I can help you =)

cherry_tiger October 24 2011, 03:03:12 UTC

I'm sorry for the late reply! I've been really busy lately!

But hey, I like your idea of Hiruma being a cat and Mamori helping him. It would be tricky to write it, of course, but I think as long as you keep them all within character, it would work. Just keep planning, and keep practicing your writing. As long as you're sincere with your story, the characters will shine through.

Oh wow, that really IS an amazing site! It really shows all sorts of music from around the world! I just with I understood Russian a bit more, cause I'm not sure if I'm missing out on anything... but whatever I've found, I love it. Thank you for sharing!

siyaaphenan October 24 2011, 08:09:01 UTC

Many thanks for your understanding =) I think that in my story Hiruma even as a cat keeps his character and Mamori keeps her character too. I tried to write it so well as I can. This fic is a story with a little share of romance for 6113 words in russian language. I can tell about this at greater length if you want ^^'

All of songs in this site have a descriptions, lyrics, clips, photos and maybe bonus compositions. You can find bonus under the video and right of photos in page of song. By the way I can load all of songs with bonus tracks in mediafire, if you want it =)
These songs are very amazing when you listen to it in evening or night. Afternoon it loses half of charm I think.

Mmm, and I have long wanted to ask you, how well do you know japanese?..
I'm studying japanese language at university for five years.) Sorry for offtopic again ^^'

cherry_tiger October 24 2011, 08:58:07 UTC

Oh, do share with me how this story goes! I'd really love to know more about it, especially with how Hiruma was transformed from a cat and how both Hiruma and Mamori get together!

That would really be lovely! I'm not sure what songs to look out for, I'll check it out tonight (I don't know what time that will be for where you are) and will check out more songs there! And now I remember... you have a fanmix, don't you? I would love to download it! Even if I may not understand most of the songs, I think it would be fun all the same.

I can generally communicate in Japanese. I'm not incredibly fluent, but I was in Japan for 3 weeks and I spoke to people there well enough for them to understand me. I just don't know a lot of words, and I'm terrible at reading kanji! But that all takes practice, and I hope to get back into shape by translating HiruMamo doujins. How about you? How have you been coping with Japanese? Is it hard for you?

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siyaaphenan October 21 2011, 16:22:57 UTC

And... Poets Of The Fall - "No End, No Beginning". What would you say about this song? =)

cherry_tiger October 24 2011, 03:04:43 UTC

I love the lyrics used in this song, especially with this line:

It's like you can't, can't kill the monster that feeds on you
No matter what you do it seems to get you every time

I like that there's this sense of hopelesness, but there's no way they're going to give up. It kind of suits this story too. Thank you so much for sharing all these great songs for me! ^^ I really enjoy them!