[Fanfic] The Wicked [Chapter 13]

[cherry_tiger]

Title: The Wicked [Chapter 13]

Rating: T

Warnings: AU, slight OOC, and as it's a semi-musical based on a not so very popular broadway musical, it can be confusing.

Summary: The Citizens of Deimon are celebrating the death of a man they deemed Wicked. But is there more to it than what it seems? Could something bigger had happened behind the

Comments

[snow_bells]

OMG! now,mamori is the one who got caught! hiruma better act quick before they do something to her...
btw,i love when u made hiruma felt jealous when mamori mentioned agon. and i laughed when hiruma made the joke about the RAM thing! :)
keep the story going,dear!

[cherry_tiger]

I'm really, really glad that you're enjoying this! I thought the RAM thing was funny, too. XD Of all the times to crack a joke and distract Mamori from taking things too seriously.

Thank you for the comment though! ^^

[bar_ohki]

From the sound of the end there, Hiruma's a rather unstable mess when it comes to his emotions. And now they're attacking the one girl he likes, that sounds so horrible.

But I like the explanation, it seems to fit what's going on with him in this story. Cerberus is cool too.

[cherry_tiger]

It was definitely kind of OOC at the end, but I wanted to show that Hiruma's had enough of having the people around him hurt or in danger because of him.

I was worried that using that song might be cheesy, but it turned out more overdramatic than cheesy. So I knew I had to give an explanation as to what's really going on in that musical sequence. I'm glad that the explanation helped.

Glad you think Cerberus is cool. His role's pretty small for now though.

[bar_ohki]

Well I thought it was awesome because it gave me the impression he's been kind of barely in control of everything and then -pow! He snaps when the one thing that was supporting him breaks.

I really like it.

[cherry_tiger]

Phew! Thank goodness! Cause as you noticed I thought it was OOC, and that it probably won't sit well with a number of people. But response has been good so far, so I'm really glad. ^^

[kelscium]

Yay! Delicious delicious cheesy goodness! ^_^

I think the song worked out pretty well since it's Hiruma singing it really sounds as if he's going insane and it really does work with your story.

it's definitely the exact amount of cheese needed here ;] *thumbs up!*

[cherry_tiger]

Hahahaha!! Yay, I'm glad you like the cheese! I was quite worried it would be OOC but so far so good! I'm really, really glad! ^^