Outlier, Chapter 7

[cherimola]

Comments

[lane_montgomery]

I feel like I crawled out of my skin and into that hospital and I am following them around with my breath held anxiously.

I don't really know how I am going to wait for a new chapter. The things you do to us with this fascinating fiction...

[cherimola]

There is something mesmerizing about your comment. Thank you. ♥

[bluemagicrose]

So I think all my questions from the last chapter was answered.

Now, to just see where everything goes from here.

[cherimola]

Excellent. :) Oh, the places we'll go...

[ltklo]

Almost a whole chapter in my favorite place - Reid's mind. I thoroughly enjoyed the almost competing thoughts in his head.

[cherimola]

So glad you enjoyed your stay. :)

[shar_jere]

I can't get enough of this. it gets better and better..there is never a dull moment you did it again i can't wait for the next chapter..

[cherimola]

Aww, thanks again for such a great comment!

[divin4]

WOW! What a powerful chapter. I fell in love with this paragraph...
And even should the transplant take, living with a foreign body within your borders meant a lifetime of tribute paid to immunosuppressive masters... I read it more than once.

Reid's POV, the assault being waged against him...he thinks by Luke, but the way you constructed it, it feels like he's fighting himself. So well done.

Then with Luke, well he's still snarky Reid, but he was being so gentle with him.

The whole thing was wonderfully written.

[cherimola]

What a powerful comment! Thank you. Just what I needed to hear. ♥