Outlier, Chapter 1

Jan 07, 2011 15:32

Genre: Drama, romance. Mostly the same universe. Mostly. (One big exception.)
Rating: Eventually NC-17 (yes, I know, that's your shocked face).
Disclaimer: Only 95 years to go till they're in the public domain!
Summary: All I’ll say is that the events of this chapter pick up after the jam-packed March 11th episode (highlights included Luke's ( Read more... )

lure, rating:nc-17, luke/reid, atwt, outlier, fan fiction

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gradgirl_07 January 7 2011, 20:54:32 UTC
I can't believe you posted already! I love it! And the cliffhanger? Crazy good. I'd be scared if I didn't know where all this is going...

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cherimola January 7 2011, 21:12:06 UTC
Thanks, luv. I could no longer resist. :)

(What an avatar!)

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f3d0ra_girl January 7 2011, 21:08:59 UTC
Hm. Interesting cliffhanger...

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cherimola January 8 2011, 21:58:22 UTC
Thanks for reading! Hope you stay tuned....

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:D bittersweetreid January 7 2011, 21:10:25 UTC
Oh cherimola, I am happy you start another multi-chaptered fic again! Downloaded it to my mobile, so I can read it over and over again. Will come back to comment properly. So far I am happy already :D

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Re: :D cherimola January 8 2011, 22:00:08 UTC
Aww, thanks for your kind words! Of course, then you reached the end of the chapter and wanted to take them back. ;)

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Re: :D, no it's still :D bittersweetreid January 9 2011, 10:07:18 UTC
Nah, cherie, I don't want to take it back. But to be true I am a little worried about this kiss. Reid's not a closet case here, is he? Hm.RL kept me from commenting, not your chapter's cliffhanger, bb! Okay, I especially loved this:
"but it felt almost as if Luke's deathless bond with Noah were draining him, like an incubus - as if his actions on Noah’s behalf weren’t always in keeping with his true self." This must be the best description of that sick relationship I every read! Noah the incubus! :D made me giggle hysterically.
And I totally love the tone of analytical / scientific Reid in this chapter. Very interesting perspective. Can't wait to read more! :)

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Re: :D, no it's still :D cherimola January 9 2011, 22:50:16 UTC
Aww, thanks! I'll be trying to keep incubus!Noah's appearances in this story to an absolute minimum. And so glad you like scientist!Reid. He's determined to get to the bottom of this. (no pun intended)

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alissablue January 7 2011, 21:16:19 UTC
OMG, I'm so happy you're back!

I'm already in love with this fic<3. But, uhm:
Katie’s smile remained even as she leaned in toward Reid. Even as she kissed him. Even as Reid returned the kiss.
Wait, what?

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cherimola January 8 2011, 22:01:43 UTC
Hehe. Hope your love endures. ;) I promise this fic will satisfy. Or your money back.

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Oh yes!!! rlb_16 January 7 2011, 21:25:18 UTC
A new story by one of my favorite authors! Happy dance!
The symptons.....the squeeze, light pressure, faint ache, subtle
hitch, the dimples...ha ha...the common denominator...Luke!
"It's called love Dr Oliver...you should try it sometime!"
I hope Reid is willing to try it! Looking forward to another
amazing journey!!!

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Re: Oh yes!!! cherimola January 8 2011, 22:02:25 UTC
Thank your for your lovely comment! This will definitely be a journey for Reid. :)

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