First Love, Chapter 13

[cherimola]

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[ltklo]

“You know…those kinds. Not at first…at first we would just fight. Occasionally, there’d be monkeys. And, OK, sometimes I would be naked, but I think that was probably more of an anxiety thing. You know, over not being able to convince you to do the surgery.”
Thanks, I really needed that little bit of levity.

I'm a softie for lots of intimate talking.

[cherimola]

Me too :) Heaven forbid we get any on the show.

[shar_jere]

“Why do you think I called you Mr. Snyder for so long?” OH GOD REID!!!!!

[snowmore]

“I liked seeing you down there.”

Luke lifted his head.

“On your knees.” Reid looked into Luke’s eyes. “In front of me.”

Oh God!! *heart flutters*

All the dreams were heated. And the talking about feelings works really.

I'm glad, in your story, that Noah told Luke what Reid had said. I loved that dialogue from the show and wish Luke had known when Reid became interested.

[cherimola]

It certainly would have moved things along :) (Sigh, what I wouldn't have given to have seen a similar scene on the show.)

As for that scene - I mean, really, what other reason could there have been for why it played out the way it did? ;)

[luvflix]

This was perfect - filled in all those holes giving us a backstory that was completely believable!

And this was unbelievably hot...“But as for these dreams, they were nothing to beat yourself up over…it wasn’t cheating. It’s not like you had any control over them.”

Luke expelled a short breath. “Maybe not…but I certainly had control when I masturbated to them.”

Reid’s hand in Luke’s hair stilled, and he lifted his head to look at Luke. Reid’s eyes were bright. “You don’t say?”

chap 12

[authorsfriend]

I was a little confused because of the bkgd stuff, but it's still hot! "Hotness is never a problem." Maybe I'll put that on my Match page...

Re: chap 12

[cherimola]

Glad to hear the confusion didn't get too in the way ;)

And hotness can definitely be a problem.