Comments | cherimola: First Love, Chapter 10

cherimola

First Love, Chapter 10

Sep 03, 2010 21:27

( unexpected moves )

lure, luke/reid, first love, atwt, fan fiction

Comments 8

ltklo September 5 2010, 21:05:01 UTC

Loved this chapter. So much emotion, and meaning, and pain. And beautifully written.

shar_jere September 6 2010, 02:18:23 UTC

“I wanted you to have something beautiful. Something worthy of you. And so you wouldn’t forget me. That’s why I bought it.” WELL WRITTEN THANK YOU THANK YOU

luvflix September 27 2010, 22:33:48 UTC

He knew he’d made progress - the walls were chipped, the turrets tumbling - but Luke had yet to breach the main defense. ... beautifully phrased, and not a truer word has been spoken.

nice use of lambent authorsfriend October 2 2010, 15:09:23 UTC

Thompson st! with the Simpsons chess pieces!
Also, nice cliff-hanger...

oops authorsfriend October 3 2010, 02:10:15 UTC

Oh my gosh. That's so weird. I took a break right after you mentioned the Thompson st chess pieces--to write about the Simpsons chess pieces--then went back to it just now and there was your reference to the Simpsons! Wow. I hope great minds don't think alike because yours is in the gutter, missy...