You've got to know that this is my favourite line yet... Luke nearly came on the spot. Don’t blow this. The embedded joke didn’t help.
And then the sweet sadness of their first time not being at all what they wanted was just heart breaking. For the first time ever I didn't even like Reid here, but understood him completely, that he was only responding to the hurt that Luke had imposed on him.
You have me completely and utterly sucked in to this story.
Wow! I liked how Reid was remote and yet giving. You can tell he is angry , but still pleasures Luke above all else. Poor Luke will pay for that hookup comment though... The sex- "Luke was no longer of this world" and "his head, his dick, his heart" - lines like these felt so right to me (mixed in with the hot lines). Gotta go to real life stuff now- more later!
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And then the sweet sadness of their first time not being at all what they wanted was just heart breaking. For the first time ever I didn't even like Reid here, but understood him completely, that he was only responding to the hurt that Luke had imposed on him.
You have me completely and utterly sucked in to this story.
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I literally tingled when I read this -- you saw right to the heart of it. I'm so glad you're reading this!
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