#317: This Strange But Familiar Path
Prompt: #317
Title: This Strange But Familiar Path
Pairing: Chen/Kai
Rating: PG
Warnings: N/A
Word count: 5700
Summary: Kim Jongdae has a stalker.
Author's note: I don't know why this turned out so long. It's probably Baekhyun's fault.
( It's a perfect day. The sun is out, bathing the mall in the heart of campus in warmth and there's just enough of a breeze that it's not too hot. )
Title: This Strange But Familiar Path
Pairing: Chen/Kai
Rating: PG
Warnings: N/A
Word count: 5700
Summary: Kim Jongdae has a stalker.
Author's note: I don't know why this turned out so long. It's probably Baekhyun's fault.
( It's a perfect day. The sun is out, bathing the mall in the heart of campus in warmth and there's just enough of a breeze that it's not too hot. )
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when i saw this prompt in the archive i was like THIS IS SO CUTE PLEASE SOMEONE WRITE THIS and thank u jesus.. it was written and I LOVE IT
chenkai are the sweetest most precious babies to me and you wrote them so CUTE i almost screamed when jongin gave him a Hint via cheek kiss..... and jongin saying that cheek kisses count kdgkdgkldg a BABY honestly..... i have a crush on the jongin you wrote he is just so CUTE
already thinking about all the things he wants to ask this boy who doesn't want to let go of him. this is....... so lovely im crying
"This is so romantic," Chanyeol says and shoves a chicken tender in his mouth. me, honestly.... or maybe im trying to shove too many grapes in my mouth to stop myself from smiling continuously while reading this fic
and baekhyun at the end sdfkdlgjdjksgjls
Jongdae slips his arm around Jongin's waist and pulls him closer, his good mood growing when Jongin naturally leans into him. im yelling so much STOP MAKING THEM SO CUTE AND CUDDLY THIS IS MY BIGGEST WEAKNESS ( ... )
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i really don't even know where to begin? the whole thing is quite funny and well-written, your narration leaves nothing to be desired. i'm not even your prompter, but this is everything i've ever wanted- easy humor, natural dialogue and relationship progression, lively characters. i adored the way you portrayed kyungsoo and i can't begin to express my delight at the baeksoo. the chingu line friendship you wrote is honestly The Best and i laughed so hard when jongdae said he had a year of 4th grade taekwondo under his belt because me too. idk if my favorite part is the grapes or jongin's entire character, he was shy, suave, earnest, adorable at all the right times. what a dream. thank you for this fic, it was a joy to read and i'll definitely be back to read it again
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the ease from friends to boyfriends was so smooth i almost slipped i loved it and finally the ending was so cute from chenkai finally becoming Official to baekhyuns crush being discovered this was amazing
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