#352: Let's pray we stay young, stay made of Lightning ⚡

Sep 11, 2015 00:03

Prompt: #352
Title: Let's pray we stay young, stay made of Lightning⚡
Pairing: girl!chen/girl!d.o
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: genderswitch!, mentions/consuming of alcohol
Word count: 14.126
Summary: Kyungsoo thinks it's hard being in love with your fellow bandmate. Especially when that bandmate is Jongdae who can't keep her gorgeous personality to ( Read more... )

3: chen's birthday 2015, pairing: chen/d.o., rating: nc-17

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xkeirafanx September 12 2015, 23:07:41 UTC
I read this from top to bottom in one go, I just couldn't stop. Girl!EXO is always a great read and I can barely remember having read girl ChenSoo.

It was very adorable that Kyungsoo was pining and Jongdae just wanted her to get in action. How did she think that could be successful when Kyungsoo never said anything whatsoever? Such idiots.

For some reasons people always find it harder to write girls being intimate than boys being intimate and that shows in their works, but I saw nothing of it here, just thoroughly enjoyed what you wrote ♥

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bookishvice September 13 2015, 01:46:03 UTC
OMFG GIRL EXO IN THIS FIC GIVES ME LIFE LOL
Great job on all the girliness here-boob grabbing, changing clothes and asking for outfit feedback, the cutness of hairstyles, the used pad (gross, Chanyeol), outraged Baek, solidarity among girl friends like Baek promising to cockblock Jonghyun hahaha, a little girl time self-love, drunk girls making voicing inappropriate innuendos (Baek plz), hoe talk, the talk during sexy times (I mean, how fucking adorable can they get?) I enjoyed this very much!

“Your face is the cutest,” she beams. “Can I kiss it again?”
This is so precious <3

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freysan September 13 2015, 02:10:02 UTC
i usually don't read chen/d.o fics and i'm not comfortable with gender benders but for some strange reason, i decided to give this a go.. abd man, this is one awesome treat.. they're just so cute!! especially kyungsoo (and baekhyun).. loved it!! (´ ▽`)

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amaxingbaek September 17 2015, 06:55:05 UTC
I'm so glad I stumbled upon this! I've been craving a new girl!EXO fic to read for the past fews days and this is absolutely perfect! I enjoyed reading this, and the only way I know how to comment is to quote stuff so here we go~

It is way too early for Kyungsoo’s liking, and Baekhyun is annoyingly happy this morning. Every morning. Every day.
The story just started and yet Baekhyun’s being annoying hahaha. A+

“Aw man, I wanted to touch her boobs!” Jongdae whines and slumps against the doorframe, causing one of the straps of her tank top to fall down and expose her shoulder.
Oh my God

“What boobs?” Jongdae asks
LMAO Jongdae :p

“I wasn’t yell--”

“What are you yelling about out here?” Baekhyun interrupts
I’m going to love Baekhyun, I just know it lol

'Somedays you wake up and feel prettier or happier than normal. When you do that, it's because you've been in contact with your true love in some way- because only love can make us feel good things so sudden'
I love this. So, so much

Jongdae sighs. "No... Maybe I should've."/wails ( ... )

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acng1993 October 22 2015, 00:44:49 UTC
i love it when i see a girl!EXO fic out there. it feels like a breath of fresh air dont get me wrong, i love yaoi through and through but good quality yuri is also amazing

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