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#98: love binds, never strings

Sep 17, 2014 19:14

Prompt: #98
Title: love binds, never strings
Pairing: chen/luhan, chen/baekhyun, implied!yixing/zitao
Rating: PG13
Warnings: very slight mention of abuse
Word count: ~8600
Summary: luhan will never belong. not when jongdae's bound and luhan's not.

( luhan trips on his shoelace the way out of the clothing store. )

2: chen's birthday 2014, pairing: chen/baekhyun, rating: pg-13, pairing: chen/luhan

Comments 8

rainsound3 September 17 2014, 12:23:31 UTC

OMG THIS IS SO GOOD BUT IM SO CONFUSED AT THE SAME TIME WHAT HISTORY WHAT WHAT

exothermc September 21 2014, 15:24:30 UTC

AHHHHH WAS IT RLLY T___T_T_T the history that jongdae mentions - his manager betraying him again. the first by money, the second by the defamation of baekhyun :( JONGDAE HAS ROTTEN LUCK. thank you so much for reading i hope you enjoy it!!!!

anonymous September 17 2014, 14:45:02 UTC

IM.... I'M SO.

I love luchen and I loved the prompt so the moment I saw this I had to read this immediately. God, this was so heartbreaking, like luhan laying in bed and listening to jongdae's song, but you wrote it so beautifully.

anD THEN SOMETHING HAPPENED WOAH
I still kinda don't get some parts like?? THAt eNDING WHAT HISTORY?? and does jongdae see the threads too or What oh my god

but I still really love this and even thought part of me wished for luchen to end up together, it really wasn't meant to be and ugh this was so agonizing to read, luhan in this fic just crushes me :^((

exothermc September 21 2014, 15:31:37 UTC

YELLS THAT FIRST LINE IS ME IF THIS EVER GETS WRITTEN. well it did. by me. HAHAHA ( ... )

xkeirafanx September 18 2014, 05:45:39 UTC

Oh God this gave me shivers. Luhan is really fucked up here.... I hope he went back to his parents...idk, takes help and gets okay again. Because that was simply aweful and while he at least cleared Baekhyun, still doesn't excuse any of his actions.

I have creeps, it's really well written.

exothermc September 21 2014, 15:34:55 UTC

he is, isn't he? i actually didn't plan where he would go - he just disappeared in my head. i have no idea where he is, either. YES LUHAN WAS A DISGRACE IN HIS STORY. he was so hard to write, because - really, now? making someone fall to the bottom until they're trampled and hurt?

thank you for having the creeps, i was aiming for it! THANK YOU AGAIN FOR THE COMPLIMENT T___T_T

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exothermc September 21 2014, 15:36:36 UTC

i don't know either huhu T_____T it just snapped. maybe someone who's bitter cut his string like what luhan almost did to jongdae. maybe he died. ahhh yeah i hope luhan's okay too, he just disappeared from the story and i myself don't know where he went - he was pretty fucked up.

thank you so much for reading! ♡♡

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exothermc September 21 2014, 15:37:14 UTC

ahhh this comment T_____T i have no words but thank you, thank you, thank you ♡♡