#349: these, our bodies, possessed by light

[lordchen]

prompt: #349
title: these, our bodies, possessed by light
pairing: chensoo
rating: pg
word count: 2630
summary: a slow romance of two people falling in love, parsec by parsec.

Comments

[iwantchocopie]

Ah, this is so pretty~

I can't imagine the bae teaching anybody to dance, though.

[xkeirafanx]

Your writing style is so eloquent, I admit I had to look up a word or two.

I really don't have many words, because this is really beautiful and... good job, I'm rarely ever speechless.

[anonymous]

hello!!!!! i was the person who sent this prompt and i am so so THRILLED!!!!! this is everything i imagined it could have been and more.. your writing is so beautiful and i love that there's so much gorgeous imagery but it's not overdone either ; u ; most of your words are so simple yet you put them together in such a lovely way... i wish i could do that!!! already i'm excited for reveals bc i want to know who you are heheh <3________<3 thank you so much for this lovely lovely piece! definitely one of my favorites now <3

[starwells]

ahhh this is so lovely. somehow, the way you write your dialogue and your descriptions really remind me of early doctor who even though, obviously, the mediums are different. thank you for writing this ♥♥

[sinisterkids]

this is so beautiful my heart :')

Jongdae points up at the sky and lets his finger pick out a little diamond from the night-black, lets it rest on his fingertip like a grain of dust. “I think they ripped apart their planet to do it. It had the metals they needed to make those machines, and when they hid themselves from every eye, the world disappeared.” He lets the star roll down his finger and rest in his palm, glowing warm and yellow. i especially love this image. it's just.... wow. god i love it so much, and every single line of this piece. your writing is evocative, pretty and truly something special ;_____;