#180: Only Me

Sep 09, 2014 20:13

Prompt: #180
Title: Only Me
Pairing: Chen/Lay
Rating: G
Word Count: 3038
Summary: Jongdae wants to be the only one Yixing cuddles with and kisses.
Author's Note: Thank you to my beta for reading through this!

Jongdae likes to think he's being discreet, casually looking across the room to where two of his fellow EXO members are curled up into each other. )

2: chen's birthday 2014, pairing: chen/lay, rating: g

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latinaeinstein September 9 2014, 14:56:19 UTC
this is fucking golden

possesive baby jongdae with his feelings, throwing a tantrum every time somebody cuddles up to his yixing ;;
wanting his skinship with yixing to be special
only a between the two of them thing

that's so fucking cute, i can't stand it

and the others trying to goad him into action. fucking lu han. fucking sehun. it's endearing in a way idk

and oh when jongdae tries to be logical about it
pragmatic about it...by shittalking the other members
“So, you know how you're always cuddling up with everyone and kissing them in weird places, like their neck or check or wherever? Not that I'm complaining, but you should probably be more selective in who you cuddle with... Maybe? I mean, let's face it, Luhan's probably an evil faerie, so you shouldn't get too close to him. Sehun too, I don't care if he's the maknae, he's high on my suspicious list. And sometimes I question Minseok-hyung's intentions, because we all consider him great and all, but that doesn't mean he's a saint.that's beautiful, too ( ... )

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lola_tenshi September 21 2014, 20:46:05 UTC
Thank you sooo much, this comment is fucking golden!!

I had so much fun writing possessive Jongdae and meddling Luhan/Sehun, so I'm glad you liked it! ♥

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teatimetaemint September 9 2014, 16:28:14 UTC
Odg, this is so incredibly precious. Cuddly Yixing and jealous Jongdae and smug Xiuhunhan are absolutely perfect.
I just loved how well written, funny and cute this was. Thanks for putting such a big smile on my face. I'll probably reread this whenever I need something that can cheer me up! ^__^

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lola_tenshi September 21 2014, 20:50:17 UTC
Aww, thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! :)

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lolistar73 September 9 2014, 18:23:28 UTC
Kyaa! I'm pretty sure this was my prompt and all I can say is OMG JONGDAE IS SO CUTE! I want to smoosh his cheeks in and baby talk him into admitting he likes Yixing and is possessive over him! :'D ( ... )

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lola_tenshi September 21 2014, 21:04:47 UTC
OMG, thank you!!! I had so much fun writing this, so thank you for the awesome prompt!

SuLay is another of my favorite pairings as well (but I ship any combination of Joonmyun, Yixing, and Jongdae . . .), which made their interaction fun to write!

Jongdae saying that he didn't want to be a means to satisfy Yixing's skinship needs was probably one of my favorite lines I wrote, I'm glad you liked it! :)

That gif . . . /rolls over/. It's so beautiful!!! Thank you again for the comment, I'm so happy you liked this!!

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xkeirafanx September 9 2014, 19:39:23 UTC
Sehun too, I don't care if he's the maknae, he's high on my suspicious list. On mine too, tbh xD

Possessive Jongdae is so fiery and so relatable. He would be so paranoid about Yixing liking him yesnomaybe that he'd want their cuddling to be special and being insecure makes him think that it's not. At the same time Yixing would think it is perfectly clear who he is close to with for which exact reasons. It surely is clear, Jongdae is just dumb, as Luhan and Minseok have well established by basically hinting that Yixing has feelings for him.

I enjoyed reading this, it was entirely cute.

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lola_tenshi September 21 2014, 21:08:08 UTC
Lol, I think Sehun's high on everyone's suspicious list (or should be!) :)

Thank you so much for the comment, I'm glad you liked it!!

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krishoislove September 9 2014, 22:13:39 UTC
This is soooo cute!! And the ending is perfect! Obnoxious Luhan is always fun to read ;)
They're so adorably awkward and Jongdae is so shy and cute and just adgdjalashdjka my feeeeeels
This made me all warm and fuzzy inside :) great work!

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lola_tenshi September 21 2014, 21:15:47 UTC
Obnoxious Luhan was fun to write, so I'm glad he's fun to read!
Thank you for the comment, I'm glad you liked it!! :)

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