#202: Unveil Me

[lordchen]

Prompt: #202
Title: Unveil Me
Pairing: Chen / L (Infinite)
Rating: PG
Word count: ~2.9k
Summary: Even though he tries to capture pieces of it on film, the world keeps passing Myungsoo by.

Comments

[chansoos]

Thank you so much for this!!!! It was really beautiful and the poems were a really really great bonus ♡

[bluedreaming]

Thanks Ayumi *hugs* we go waaaay back with this lol ♡

[byakuya_777]

Wow, so beautiful! the entire story it's like a poem, so beautifully written ♥
I love the happy ending ♥

[bluedreaming]

Thanks so much for reading and the the comment ♡ since the prompt was photography I wanted to try to paint a picture with words ^^ so I'm glad I at least partially succeeded

[xkeirafanx]

I really love that you put fractures of feelings and images that Myungsoo has right into running sentences, it makes it authentic.

I enjoy that we only learned about the volume of Jongdae's existence in Myungsoo's life in university step by step, very much like Myungsoo does. I feel a little for Jongdae here, although this is not from his point of view.

[bluedreaming]

Thanks so much for reading and your comment (ㅠ_ㅠ) ♡ run-on sentences are one of the banes of my existence so it was a relief to be allowed to use them ^.<

Yes I think Jongdae got the more agonizing part of the deal and I love how you you worded that - the reader learning about Jongdae along with Myungsoo ☆彡

[jazzalion]

I love this! The writing style was so visceral and flowed nicely and I think it was overall very well written... especially the haikus! Very creative

[bluedreaming]

Thanks so much for reading and commenting so kindly ♡ I was worried about the haikus so I'm glad you liked them

[sinisterkids]

this is rly beautiful. i'm so *heart eyes* rn to have read such an eloquent, amazing piece for this pairing. and the haikus are rly lovely :3

[bluedreaming]

Thanks so much for reading and your lovely comment ♡ I'm so (♡o♡) I'm glad you liked the haikus.