Fic: Nice Day For A White Wedding Part 2/2

Mar 17, 2010 14:36

Title: Nice Day For A White Wedding Part 2/2
Rating: R
Word Count: 1335
Summary: Hikaru always dreamed of being the hero groom who rescues the damsel in the white wedding dress. During their honeymoon, Pavel tries to make that fantasy come true.
Disclaimer: They're not mine, unfortunately.
Notes: From this prompt at st_xi_kink_meme. It was originally my own ( Read more... )

fanfiction, star trek: xi, rating: r

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katmarajade March 17 2010, 18:48:36 UTC
So cute! I love that Pavel talked to Hikaru's sisters about it and did this! And the black briefs and the cuteness and the garter at the end-- yes, indeed. So sweet!

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lallyloo March 17 2010, 20:43:45 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

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saavikam77 March 17 2010, 18:50:34 UTC
*cracks up* XD This was so adorable and sweet! I love how even though the white dress game faded away as Hikaru got older, that Pavel in the white dress was still hot as hell. ^_~

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lallyloo March 17 2010, 20:44:37 UTC
Of course Pavel in a white dress would still be hot as hell! ;D

Thank you!!

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fairhearing March 17 2010, 19:19:48 UTC
SPOILER ALERT: I WAS THE EXPANDER ANON

And this was so hot and sweet and wonderful, exactly what I was thinking of. Thank you for the original prompt and also for filling it, hee hee ^_^;

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lallyloo March 17 2010, 20:52:06 UTC
OMG. YOU ARE AMAZING. I wouldn't have even attempted this without your extra ideas! Thank you!

And hey, I just checked out your journal and you've filled a prompt for me before! This amazing piece of voyeurism & exhibitionism. So thank you again for that! :D

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herinfiniteeyes June 15 2010, 19:19:16 UTC
NICE! It would appear we both have that voyeurism kink;) Haha

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jessofthebugs March 17 2010, 19:51:52 UTC
That is sweet like candy. I think I need to see a dentist or shoot up some insulin... or something.

Pavel in a white dress.

...yes, that's hot.

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lallyloo March 17 2010, 20:52:55 UTC
Haha thanks! :D

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ilmatarlady March 17 2010, 23:12:05 UTC
Lawl, after part one I was ready with my lace hankie to sniff at the beauty that is Chulu and you slap me with Pavel in a white dress. XD

But it's a good thing I brought that hankie because this was beautiful; that Sulu didn't need the dress but what it signified. THESE TWO ARE MEANT TO BE TOGETHER and there's no such thing as 'too romantic' with them.
LOVED IT! :3

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lallyloo March 18 2010, 17:46:58 UTC
Haha yeah.. That's why I did it in two parts, because this part is so different from the first one..

And this was supposed to be a bit more pervy, but no matter what I tried I couldn't write it that way.. I had to make it less about the dress and more about them.

Again, thank you bb! :D

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