Comments | chekov_sulu: Fic: Nice Day For A White Wedding Part 1/2

lallyloo in chekov_sulu

Fic: Nice Day For A White Wedding Part 1/2

Mar 17, 2010 03:32

Title: Nice Day For A White Wedding Part 1/2
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~690
Summary: Hikaru always dreamed of being the hero groom who rescues the damsel in the white wedding dress. As he grows older, and meets Pavel, his dreams change.
Disclaimer: They're not mine, unfortunately.
Notes: From this prompt at st_xi_kink_meme. It was originally my own prompt, ( Read more... )

fanfiction, star trek: xi, rating: pg-13

Comments 12

gingerberrycat March 17 2010, 10:01:55 UTC

Bouncy, bouncy, bouncy!
Im bouncing on my heels, cuz i loved this fic soo very much.
Part two soon?

lallyloo March 17 2010, 15:10:35 UTC

Haha thank you! I'm glad you like it!

And yup, part two is coming soon. I'm just trying to finish it up.

asimaiyat March 17 2010, 11:57:26 UTC

Eeeee! I love this. The proposal, omg, incredibly sweet and pretty and adorable.

lallyloo March 17 2010, 15:10:57 UTC

Thank you! :D

katmarajade March 17 2010, 15:14:15 UTC

Oh! This is just so lovely! I really like it! I like the style-- it's such a simple, romantic way to tell the story. I like the glimpses of Hikaru's past and the idea of him saving damsels from rr tracks as a kid. Ah, Hikaru-- you sweetie! Such a slow, romantic, lovely courtship and development. Nicely done.

lallyloo March 17 2010, 20:54:40 UTC

I'm glad you liked the style. Thank you so much!!

natong March 17 2010, 18:36:21 UTC

awwwww i loved this so very much!
it was so sweet<3
the reason why i ship this pairing is seriously because of the gooey sweetness C

lallyloo March 17 2010, 20:55:31 UTC

Aww that's one of the reasons I love them too :D Thank you!

(and your icon is ADORABLE)

ilmatarlady March 17 2010, 23:04:45 UTC

I began reading this at work (usually a bad idea) but the IT guy made a surprise visit and found me this close to chinhands-ing and looking like a giant :D emoticon.
This was seriously adorable! I love your Sulu; his backstory and the story of how he fell in love with Pavel.
In fact, i was thinking earlier that Sulu indeed fell for Pavel - but Pavel caught him. (at that particular thought I had the visit hence my ♥_♥ look at the time)

I love how romantic Sulu is; how intent to do everything by the book - the roses, the proposal, carrying Pavel over the threshold. I love how silly romantic those two make me! :D
Lovely, bb! Need to read part two now!

lallyloo March 18 2010, 17:39:45 UTC

:D

I'm so glad you liked this! I like to think Sulu's a closet romantic, especially when it comes to Pavel..

Thank you bb!