And Another One...

Apr 15, 2006 10:55

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ilthit April 15 2006, 15:14:14 UTC
Hee. I love the "No, sir. Not like that, sir. You must be joking. Sir."

A nit: "loose" is an adjective, "lose" is a verb.

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amazon_syren April 15 2006, 15:37:24 UTC
Glad you like the "You must be joking. Sir." :-)

I figure she's protesting a bit too much at that point... ;-)

Have fixed the 'lose'. Thanks for pointing it out. :-)
(Although loose is technically also a verb, as in: "She loosed the chain, and down she lay" from 'The Lady of Shallot'. ;-)

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ilthit April 15 2006, 16:02:17 UTC
Ah, well. But "lose" is never an adjective.

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amazon_syren April 15 2006, 16:12:45 UTC
True. :-)

Must fis that in the other post, as well. ;-)

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