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Apr 15, 2006 10:55
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ilthit
April 15 2006, 15:14:14 UTC
Hee. I love the "No, sir. Not like that, sir. You must be joking. Sir."
A nit: "loose" is an adjective, "lose" is a verb.
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amazon_syren
April 15 2006, 15:37:24 UTC
Glad you like the "You must be joking. Sir." :-)
I figure she's protesting a bit too much at that point... ;-)
Have fixed the 'lose'. Thanks for pointing it out. :-)
(Although loose is technically also a verb, as in: "She loosed the chain, and down she lay" from 'The Lady of Shallot'. ;-)
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ilthit
April 15 2006, 16:02:17 UTC
Ah, well. But "lose" is never an adjective.
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amazon_syren
April 15 2006, 16:12:45 UTC
True. :-)
Must fis that in the other post, as well. ;-)
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A nit: "loose" is an adjective, "lose" is a verb.
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I figure she's protesting a bit too much at that point... ;-)
Have fixed the 'lose'. Thanks for pointing it out. :-)
(Although loose is technically also a verb, as in: "She loosed the chain, and down she lay" from 'The Lady of Shallot'. ;-)
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Must fis that in the other post, as well. ;-)
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