Comments | chastinelove: Support

ladysapphirekym in chastinelove

Support

Sep 12, 2005 11:45

I WROTE SOMETHING! I's a bit crappy, I'm rusty from not writing for so long (it's been about 2 weeks since I've even attempted a fic! I'm going mad!) But it's the best I can offer at the moment. Please be constructive with your reviews, or I might never be able to drag myself out of this creatuive slump

Title: Support
Rating: Pg-13?
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Comments 13

redderz September 12 2005, 13:07:04 UTC

I've missed your fics... and this one has definitely made up for the long absence! ;)
I'm afraid I'm no good at constructive. I don't even know if there's anything I can find to give constructive crit on! XD I was just transfixed throughout the whole thing. I could imagine it in my head... and just. Wow. I love the ending the most.
I don't think you're in a slump at all. ;)

ladysapphirekym September 12 2005, 13:11:56 UTC

hh you're ace, thankyou so much for reviewing. I kind of felt nervous about the ending cause I wrote it in a bit of a rush so I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it *huggles and cookies*

fated_to_flames September 12 2005, 14:40:16 UTC

OMG LUFFLE IT.

*GLOMP*

YAAAAAAY Chas! It was so sweet and wonderful and touching and...I need to write now. Heehee. Wish I had an idea.

ladysapphirekym September 13 2005, 14:39:54 UTC

*huggles* Thankee for reviewing ^_^ You make me smile ^_^

fallen_ember September 12 2005, 14:54:51 UTC

Absolutely amazing. I've missed your writing! And this ideas was wonderful. Chas being the strong one for John. Wow. *bows before your creative genius*

ladysapphirekym September 13 2005, 14:40:31 UTC

*huggles and feeds you cookies* Thankeh ^_^ That means a lot

mrsshialabeouf September 12 2005, 15:56:27 UTC

ahhhh! *screams*
*hugs*
*hugs some more*
i swear you are one of the best writters i've ever had the pleasure of reading and this fic proves it.
you are amazing.
you wrote this so well. you made john seem vunerable! you made chas the strong one and OMFG it rocked!

you are so ace and u totaly know it!

ladysapphirekym September 13 2005, 14:41:30 UTC

*squeal huggle* I luffle yah, thankee so much ^_^

roxierocks September 12 2005, 17:29:42 UTC

This didn't seem crappy at all. It had nice flow, and I liked the hesitancy in Chas when he was faced with JOhn's situatuation at first, the way he just tried to block it all out.

but to stop himself screaming he would have to stop himself dreaming, and if he stopped himself dreaming he was stopping himself sleeping

this line wass my favourite. amazing para rhymes, fab repition.
loved it.

ladysapphirekym September 13 2005, 14:42:14 UTC

Awwh, thakyou ^_^ I really appriciate that, s'epecially cause I wasn't sure whtether to add that line or not. Thankee!