Your Heart Is My Home

Mar 30, 2010 17:39

Your Heart is My Home

a/n: could be seen as a sequel to greed, but it isn’t necessarily meant to be. Not sure how I feel about this piece. It was my first attempt at writing full sex but I sort of chickened out at the end.

summary: Spock didn’t think Jim would return.

Rating: R/NC-17

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fic, star trek, k/s, home

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xlcatloveress March 30 2010, 22:09:33 UTC
GUH! Love the frantic pacing in this, and the breathless feel your writing style gave to the fic overall. It wasn't hard seeing Spock's anxiety and concern in the way you pulled the reader through this at almost lightspeed and I very much enjoyed reading this!

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chassie730 April 1 2010, 21:16:34 UTC
Thankyou! Getting that feel was the hardest part of writing it so I'm glad my efforts weren't in vain :)

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chassie730 April 1 2010, 21:16:49 UTC
thankyou :D

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kristan1 March 30 2010, 23:19:24 UTC
I can't even form a coherent sentence about how much I loved this story! It was just the right mix of angst, smexin' & pure love!! Great Job!

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chassie730 April 1 2010, 21:17:22 UTC
aw, thanks. I've always wanted to write something that did that to people so you've just made my whole day

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flagrantialuna March 30 2010, 23:30:55 UTC
I love Spock's hidden emotional side, the way he is desperate for Jim to be okay and shuts down when he believes that Jim won't.
Short, but powerful. Thanks for sharing.

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chassie730 April 1 2010, 21:18:15 UTC
Thankyou!

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angels3 March 31 2010, 00:42:13 UTC
Loved this to pieces.

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chassie730 April 1 2010, 21:18:24 UTC
thanks :D

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