I want to be your secret (13-15/26)

[chasing_spring]

Title: I want to be your secret
Pairing: Ryopi
Genre: AU / Drama / Friendship / Romance
Rating: PG-13 (swearing)
Summary: Pi is a Johnny's idol and Ryo is a salaryman living in the same apartment building. Despite coming from different worlds, they form a friendship that ends up being a pillar of support through the various trials they encounter,

Comments

[tatoeba]

;lkansd;lgkasd;fa Seeing these three chapters just made my day. But omg a;lskdng;a Yamapi. ;_____________; I just want to give him a big hug. Poor guy. I really like how you show the kind of emotional rollercoaster he has to go through; the side of an idol most people don't think about or really get to see. Like this line:

Pi allows himself one single terrified and gasped sob before drawing everything inside and composing himself once more.

I loved that. It was heartbreaking but I just loved this moment. That he can't waste time letting it all get to him but instead he goes to fix things and ;alskdng;al The entire scene with Mary and Julie had me so angry. Those bitches. D< Yamapi's anger and his frustration and the bit about the fight leaving him just a;lsdkng;asd It really makes me wonder what they go through when these sorts of things happen in real life. :( Poor boys. ♥

On the upside, lol. I lovelovelove the RyoPi. There was just so much in these chapters that was amazing. I love how they always seem to be watching the other - Yamapi watching Ryo drive, watching Ryo sleep, Ryo watching Yamapi talk with that lady. They are so in tune with each other but not at the same time because clearly they don't get it lol. I really like how slowly and naturally their feelings for each other are coming through; it's obvious but not quite yet to them and I think it's really nicely paced and doesn't feel too rushed. ♥

And random moments that I just adored and therefore need to be quoted back to you:

Right here and now, Pi feels he’s discovering a completely different part of himself that doesn’t belong to Johnny or Mary or the rest of the whole entire world.

for a moment (a heart-racing breath-catching moment), Pi almost gives in. But he resists; this is one spell he doesn’t want to break.

If Ryo is but a mere spoke in the turning wheel, then Pi is the axis, making the whole world spin.

In a sudden move, Pi’s grasping Ryo’s hand across the table.

“You’ll be fine,” he says with feeling.

a;lskdnga;lskdg There are definitely more but these moments just made me all ;alsknglas *wibbles*

I-I don't know what else to say and this comment is a little all over the place but a;lsknd;gals So excited that you updated and I cannot wait for the next part! Thank you~ :DD ♥

[chasing_spring]

Zomg, another amazing and long comment ♥ I love reading these, although I feel like a narcissist XD;

You know, sometimes I wonder if they even get talked to at all about papas pics, or whether their managers just issue an automatic "just friends" or "no comment" to the press.

I have to say I had a bit of sadistic joy writing Pi's emotional parts, because he always seems so composed and in control...so he kind of got doubly tortured...over and over and over again =( Sorry Pi =(

These are some of my favourite bits, because of how slow everything is. For them, everything's been a natural progression, but now a part of them thinks they have to work to preserve what they have before it progresses any further and they realise what's truly going on.

If Ryo is but a mere spoke in the turning wheel, then Pi is the axis, making the whole world spin.

You mentioned this line ♥ This is one of my favourites.

THANK YOU SO MUCH for writing all that ♥ I love you for it, you have no idea. It's so amazing, seriously. Thank you ♥