Comments | charming_syrai: terminator: scc/fight club; someone else (john/riley)

charming_syrai

terminator: scc/fight club; someone else (john/riley)

Nov 11, 2008 03:31

terminator: the sarah connor chronicles/fight club. john/riley. R; slight sexual references (underage) & violence & some bad language. about 2545 words :: It smells like violence and faith, like blind belief. Like a new, different kind of future.

( SOMEONE ELSE )

!fan fiction

Comments 7

tassosss November 11 2008, 23:27:41 UTC

This is brilliant. I didn't see where you were going with it, but it works really well, that John takes this anger and frustration and ends up making it his, both his own and Tyler's. I really really like this.

charming_syrai November 11 2008, 23:34:08 UTC

Thanks! I'm not sure if even I knew where I was going with it, heh. I had a plan when I started writing, but I think somewhere along the way John and the fic just kinda took the matter into their own hands and went where they wanted to, no questions asked. But yeah, thanks for commenting :D

dharkapparition November 11 2008, 23:45:36 UTC

This is Excellent.

I didn't see Fight Club, but it was described to me (in great detail by he hubby)and I could see it happening.

Would you be willing to post this over on sccxovers?

charming_syrai November 11 2008, 23:50:46 UTC

Thanks! And sure, I'm willing ^^;

dharkapparition November 11 2008, 23:51:40 UTC

Yay! I'll make you an author tag after you post.

lilhobbit November 12 2008, 18:50:34 UTC

IntenseYou definitely made Riley and John into what they should be in the show instead of that damn puppy love you'd expect from OC. Surely John is older than your regular 16-year-old. Surely he'd be more mature than what we've seen so far. I mean, I love Dekker, but John's inner dilemma is handled so mainstream by the damn writers ( ... )

charming_syrai November 12 2008, 19:43:37 UTC

I'm HAPPY now. You know, at first I didn't wanna post this story without you reading it through first (I never feel I can write the characters right, I suppose and your insights always mean the world to me, eh) but then I figured I'll just give it a shot... so obviously, YOU liking it makes my day!! :D And I agree with pretty much everything you said ( ... )