Mar 04, 2012 22:32
The prologue is
here (
Chapter 1 )
character: jadeite,
character: nephrite,
character: ami/mercury,
timeline: future,
character: usagi/moon,
character: kunzite,
fandom: sailor moon,
character: senshi,
character: rei/mars,
character: zoisite,
verse: serenity,
character: minako/venus,
character: makoto/jupiter,
character: shitennou,
character: mamoru/tuxedo,
fic: serenity
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1) Lembas!! Hikawa!!
2) "Endy was a melancholic bastard but he had a heart of gold, something he did a lousy job of hiding... If people thought Endymion was miserable, Keanu was permanently situated under a cloud which rained down misery." Ah hah, love it!
3) MARYLAND ZIPPER!
4) I'm so glad we got to see more of Rei/Ami/Endy growing up together after the first scene. Your Ami is so spunky and it's awesome that their banter keeps going after she's matured more (toad-in-a-hole and “I don’t communicate with sub-human species"!). But what happened after the Shields estate got destroyed?? How did they come back together on the Serenity?? How did Endy react to her marrying Jethro??
5) "Jethro was frantically scanning his screen from the pilot’s chair, comparing their situation in Mandarin to that of being raped by a Jovian Manticore with no lube amidst his reading out of the ship’s schematics." Butbutbut we cannot leave it here! Going from his POV in the beginning was also fantastic.
6) “-and I’m gonna ask that sweet-hearted little sister of yours to marry me.” THIS WAS TOTALLY NOT WHAT I WAS EXPECTING AND WAY MORE AWESOME.
Cannot wait for more. So happy about the wonderful updates on this and Hooligans!! I have notes written up for Hooligans but I haven't gotten around to posting them on FF.net yet. Will do so soon!
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