Getting to Florence (part 3 of 4)

[charlie_bz]

Title: Getting to Florence (part 3 of 4)
Author:charlie_bz  
Pairing/Characters:  Bruce Wayne/Selina Kyle
Rating:  For mature readers - nothing terribly explicit but there are a few F words in this part.  Like 2.
Warnings:  see above
Spoilers:  Dark Knight Rises
Disclaimer: Dark Knight Rises does not belong to me.

Part 1

Part 2

Comments

[wytchcroft]

LOL! YOUR imagination i think! :))

[charlie_bz]

I'll be in my bunk.

[nrgburst]

LOL Cute ending.

One thing I noticed about the east wing of Wayne mansion in TDKR: everything is draped up and covered save for a few objects. One of them is a telescope, so I imagine he spent a lot of time not thinking about the earth at all. But I like your version too. :)

Let me know if you want me to nitpick mechanical things. There are a few. :P

[charlie_bz]

I loved the telescope!

After the fact mechanical nitpicks aren't terribly helpful to me. Unless there's a spelling or grievous grammatical error, the story stays as posted otherwise I would've driven myself crazy years ago second guessing every little thing in my stories! It's like sending my kids off to school. But scarier! :)

[nrgburst]

OK, just wanted to be sure. :) I like nitpicks and concrit any time and will edit even months after posting. But I know most people aren't that crazy detail-oriented. :D

I can't wait to get my copy of TDKR! Argh- mine will arrive between Dec 6 and 8th and it's bloody hard to research without the actual movie in theaters anymore.

[klcthebookworm]

“You look like the cat that ate the canary,” Nicholas said, standing aside to let her in.

“The bat.” -- *SNICKER*

I wish I could go roaming around the world without a care in the world.

And the world's greatest detective (well, not so much in the Nolanverse) has the nerve to call Selina nosy. That earned another snicker.