Desire In Her Eyes

[charlie4931]

 Before you read i'd just like to say that this is the very first time i've done anything like this and my english skills are the worst lol, i tryed to make it kinda fun but didnt wanna over do it as it's my first one, comments would me nice, let me know how i can do better. if you see this posted by another account its my other account but im not

Comments

[rippea]

Nice one sis :) It's wicked. LOVELOVELOVE it :) When did you start writing this? Normally you tell me about this stuff :O Love it :D <3

[shebunkin1]

That was just brilliant. I can't wait for and update. A really good read.

[charlie4931]

thankyou shebunkin1 :) i didnt think i was very good but its really nice to see comments like that, thankyou i'll try and update soon! :D

[charlie4931]

thankyou shebunkin1 :) i didnt think i was very good but its really nice to see comments like that, thankyou i'll try and update soon! :D

[allydonz]

Loving the fic, brilliant :D xxx

[charlie4931]

thank you allydonz!!! all of thesecomments are a big confidance boost :D i'll write another one soon