I Must Be Dreaming [Yewook]

[char_isa_pirate]

Title: I Must Be Dreaming.
Prompt: #16 Quiet Places
Challenge Status: 2/100
Pairing: Yesung/Ryeowook, hint of Sihan
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1389
Summary: I must be dreaming or pinch me to waking-- so undeniably yours, as long as I'm losing it so completely.

Comments

[thundersquall]

That was just - omg I don't even have words. Absolutely stunning, completely beautiful, I loved it.

I think the most striking thing about this was how you managed to write YeWook even though it's just Ryeowook there, thinking about his relationship with Yesung. And your characterisations are just fantastic. Like this: Strange Yesung, all small features and enormous voice, never quite deciding on one personality- extrovert one minute and introvert the next in a way that confuses some but completely captivates Ryeowook, apparently caught between the desire to present his quirky side to the fans, and his role as one of the oldest, and so never quite having the authority over his dongsaengs that he hopes for. I mean I was literally reading with my mouth open at how real you managed to keep this and how perfectly you described Yesung, as well as the ways Ryeowook reacts to him. It was just spot-on characterisation, really. *_____*

ksdfkhdgshk Urgh suffice to say, this was LOVELY. Memming this and thank you for writing such a gorgeous piece! ♥

[char_isa_pirate]

*dies on the floor*
Thank you so much. Oh my god.
When I saw the notification, I was like, HMM HER USERNAME SOUNDS SUSPICIOUSLY FAMILIAR, WHERE HAVE I SEEN IT BEFORE? I was literally frolicking around on yewookaday moments before I decided to write this. Hello inspiration ♥

kjkdfjaklsdkljfl thank you ;_____; I'm always worried about my characterization~ I'm so glad you enjoyed it! *fangirls all over self*