Young Maid
It was a day like any other, or so Mike thought. Having thrown his morning DEA tails, Mike drove to the Vamonos Pest headquarters. Though he had parked three blocks away, he entered through the garage and walked into the main office where he saw something unexpected
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i love love love how considerate you make mike when he's entwined with jesse. no intention to hurt him, wants him to feel good, wanting to hear that jesse's okay and wants it just as much and ughhhhhhhhhhhh god.
and shit, jesse crossdressing as sassy rick grimes would tickle me pink. a maid outfit? unf unf unf. unf. this was just too much.
the initial embarrassment jesse feels at being caught by mike is just too cute. wanting to storm off and feel humiliated only to be pretty much seduced into kinky wall sex is like, flawless. and this line:
"...Walter could walk in any minute and find them like this. For some reason, that made Mike happier."
holy shit, dude. i've never really been a walter fan (and, unpopular opinion here, i never could stomach the idea of him and jesse romantically involved), so this little victory mike feels, this sense that he's kind of staking his claim, hnngg. just beautiful. also:
"...and he kissed Jesse with all his heart before spilling into him hard and fast."
goddamnitt you knocked all my kinks outta the ballpark. the sheer feelings, the fact that mike gives more of a shit for jesse than just sex was so evident in that line. i mean, instant bone-age was kind of a given when confronted with that maid costume, but i love how there's still more than that. also i'm kind of a fan of barebacking and like idek it's just hot and ughhhh. ooh ooh, one more:
"It was a tight fit as always..."
this implies they've done it before, right? oh god yes a million times yes please thank you.
also, in response to your response on "exact reverse opposite", dude, take your tiiiime. i know how the real world interferes with the creative process. jobs, school, they take precedent. C= i just have to thank you a billion times over for posting what you do whenever you do because you're truly a talented writer. and i dropped a comment on Sydpenguinbunny's friend's only post in hopes i might be allowed entrance to her treasure cove of fanfics and made a stop by Heather's page as well, per your recommendation. seriously awesome friends you got, dude.
anyway, like i said, no rush. get your priorities in order then write at your leisure. just know your work is always crazy appreciated. C=
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Whoa, that sassy rick grimes picture :D I might need to buy this for...research purposes.
I love writing Mike/Jesse as more than just sex. In fact, I don't think it's possible to write them as just sex, because of the way that Mike is. Without the emotions, there's really no way Mike would engage in such a risky move as having sex with one of his business partners, especially considering how jealously Walter guards Jesse. But as we've seen in canon Mike's willing to take risks where Jesse's concerned because he cares about him.
Walter and Jesse...I could say a lot of things about Walt and Jesse. Some of the first and best slash fanfictions I read about Breaking Bad involved those too. Mike/Jesse is my favorite but in the absence of that I'd rather have Walt and Jesse together than not. No shame in not being into that though :)
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you for understanding that my real life stuff unfortunately has to come before fanfic writing. If I could get paid for this, I'd probably graduate from college early and write 24/7. :)
Thank you for your support ^_^
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