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Scarlet Gift [2]

May 04, 2010 18:53

Title: Scarlet Gift
Author: changline
Rating: R/NC-17
Pairing: Yoochun and OC
Kink: Bondage, Food
Genre: Smut
Summary: Yukino's friends had had enough of Yukino just lazing about in their apartment during her birthday, they wanted her to have fun again, so they gave her a Scarlet Gift...^^
A/N: This was originally for bingkay_baxia , I wrote it as a birthday ( Read more... )

* smut, * tvxq, * kink: bondage, * kink:food, * author:changline, * yoochun and fc, * nc-17

Comments 20

changline May 4 2010, 10:54:13 UTC

spot for raindrop_symph since she asked for it...^^

raindrop_symph May 5 2010, 16:18:28 UTC

1. yah..you shouldd give spots wholeheartedly..i kinda helped you with this you know :p
2. i only sad it was 'bitin' because i prefer having longer after sex talks and such :D
3. i waited really long for this so i need an epilogue *puppy eyes*

demanding?

queen of kinky smut? charoot..

changline May 6 2010, 02:20:52 UTC

Hmmm...yeah kinda demanding...epilogue?
Maybe...^^

convolution May 13 2010, 19:15:03 UTC

Omfg perfect fic to read before beddd! 아!!!!! 유천오빠!!!!!!
Seriously this was soooo good! Napa-curse ako while reading! Rofl;; want yoochun so bad;;;

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changline May 5 2010, 06:40:10 UTC

Haha...Yeah, they(cherries) are that...
Thanks for reading and commenting...^^

izanamiwiles May 4 2010, 22:14:33 UTC

I didn't think you could kill me with Yoochun but you did!
OH MY GOD this was beyond HOT....i can't even find my words!
Seriously, I'm at a loss of words right now, and you of all people know that I usually use too many words XDD!!
SO....well, I guess I'll try to sleep now, and probably will have very nice dreams ^^,
(Oh by the way, since we're on the same wave-length brainwise, I kept thinking it was grapes and not cherries! XDD)
Thankkkkkkkkkkkk youuuuuuuuu you're just awesome ^^: <33333

changline May 5 2010, 06:44:08 UTC

Lol...I'm glad you liked it iz...^^
I was actually kinda worried on the ending, but I guess it worked out just fine...
Yeah, you do use too many words, but I like it...
Maybe I'll try using grapes in 'Touch?'

izanamiwiles May 5 2010, 13:52:32 UTC

Oh yep I liked it! Like it a lot! Re-read it a few times too (kinda what I'd do for everything you write ^^)
The ending worked perfectly, what we're you worried about? ^^;
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA nOW that I can't wait to see/read! ^__^
Oh by the way I looove my new nickname! thanx for it ^^,
*Humongous hugsssssss*

lady_monochrome May 5 2010, 06:42:10 UTC

Holy O___O

That was very creative with the cherries and doing the game thing... Damn HOT!

changline May 5 2010, 06:48:34 UTC

Thanks so much for reading...^^
I thought it would be boring just to put the cherries in then take them out, so, viola, hence the game...^_^

bingkay_baxia May 5 2010, 08:25:59 UTC

and na.bitin si Chie?
eh??? i'm out of words...
you really are the queen mrs.shim...

changline May 5 2010, 08:36:26 UTC

lol...Yah, nabitin xa...I sort of ran out of ideas, so...I ended it as best as i could...^^
Queen? Queen of what?

bingkay_baxia May 5 2010, 09:15:22 UTC

queen of kinky smut!
u don't seem to run out of ideas...
err...where do u get them from???

changline May 6 2010, 02:15:23 UTC

I get them from Novels and my perverted mind...
wahahaha