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SO IM SUBMITTING THIS TOMORROW FOR THE COUNTY LIT FAIR AND I REALLLY NEED CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM. PLEASE PLEASE COMMENT YOUR THOUGHTS. (its a villanelle which is a french verse poem and i still need one more line in the fifth tercet that has an ending rhyming with what slut shut e.t.c i starred the place)

Am I a virgin?
Am I a virgin to what?
I am a virgin to love.

I’m not a virgin to being another version./////I’m not a virgin to receiving that sly grin.(WHICH ONES BETTER??)
I’m not a virgin to being nicknamed slut.
Am I a virgin?

I am a virgin to not knowing where your body ends and mine begins
I am a virgin to that wonderful and horrible feeling deep in my gut
I am a virgin to love.

I’m not a virgin to drinking my senses away with gin
I’m not virgin to being tagged the high-school harlot
Am I a virgin?

I am a virgin to having someone make me feel beautiful within.
I am a virgin to that feeling after their touch that lingers as if I’ve been cut.
I am a virgin to love.

Am I a virgin?
I’m not a virgin to committing the ultimate sin.
I’m not a virgin to lying in bed with a cigarette hearing the door slam shut.
I am a virgin to love.