Sweat, by hafital (Sonny/Vinnie, Wiseguy, Cliche)

[hafital]

Thanks to astolat for the beta! And the patience. :)

Sweat (3379 words)
Sonny/Vinnie, adult
Wiseguy
Cliche (cave/small space)

Comments

[merricatk]

I'm sorry you got an achy head from it but--wow! That was terrific, & the voices were dead-on.

[hafital]

eeeee! Thank you. :) The achy head was probably more from my late night the night before. heh. (not that WG isn't tricksy to write, though)

[merricatk]

It most certainly is--I find it harder even than "Twin Peaks." But you do it very, very well.

[killabeez]

Oh, honey, yes. You nailed Sonny's voice, despite any doubts you might have had. I'm weirdly having a hard time reading Vinnie/Sonny right now, and can't even begin to explain why, but this was hot and rang true. I especially loved Vinnie's moments of panic -- you could practically taste them.

[hafital]

I'm weirdly having a hard time reading Vinnie/Sonny right now, and can't even begin to explain why

:D Oh, believe me, I had enough trouble getting into the right headspace for WG, so I understand. Of course, *now* they're both talking to me a little bit more. Figures.

Thank you so much for reading! *smoochesyou*

[mutecornett]

Oh, this is really *fantastically* hot and I'm sad I missed it the first time around on my flist. ♥ (What would you like in your icon?)

[hafital]

EEEE! Thank you! And OMG, I don't know what to ask for. Would it be too difficult to get, like, a moment from the story in icon form?

[mutecornett]

Sorry it's taking so long! I'm just dropping in to say I haven't forgotten or anything. :)

[hafital]

Oh, no worries. Take your time. :)

[sidlj]

EXCELLENT cliche-fic! Oh so very hot. :-)

Love the moment at the end, with Sonny asking, not demanding. Sexy and human and vulnerable. Nice.

[hafital]

YAY! Thank you. Sonny is *hard* to write, the bastard, but he's also rewarding. :)

[nestra]

Yowsa.

[hafital]

heeee.