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[SPN] Confessions and Lamentations, 1/1

Oct 24, 2007 15:44

Title: Confessions and Lamentations
Author: chaletian
Fandom: Supernatural
Rating: PG-13 (for language)
Characters: Dean, Sam
Spoilers: Vague AHBL, season 3
Summary: It’s Dean’s last night, and Sam has a confession. Companion to The Deconstruction of Falling Stars.
Author’s Notes: For a challenge in my head to write fic using Babylon 5 episode titles. It ( Read more... )

acts of sacrifice, fic, supernatural

Comments 13

katie__pillar October 24 2007, 14:51:56 UTC

Ah, the washing up. My main plus point.

So funny and sad at the same time. Sam's hair and Amy's panties and the song. There was a SONG!

Also, isn't "talking the piss" a bit... English? Don't know what it should be instead, though.

chaletian October 24 2007, 14:56:09 UTC

Yes it is. But I couldn't think what else to put. Boo. At least I remembered to change knickers to panties before I posted. Go me.

Well, you tidy, too. It's not all about the washing up. ♥

katie__pillar October 24 2007, 15:05:47 UTC

You need an American person to comment and tell you what to say. I trust you have pimped? One will pop up soon with a suggestion, I'm sure.

I've not been doing much on the tidying front recently, you must admit.

chaletian October 24 2007, 15:09:50 UTC

Have I pimped?

Have. I. Pimped?

You're asking me, Miss Squeenie McPimpalot, if I've pimped?

Ee, I don't know...

Thread 7

quiet_rebel October 24 2007, 16:03:33 UTC

Oh, man. That ending with Sam talking to the Impala and how it doesn't talk back :(

ultraviolet9a October 24 2007, 17:11:58 UTC

It's just as graceful and beautiful as the companion piece. But dude. I mean...jesus, can you imagine just ticking away the hours just knowing that the one person you love the most will be gone? It's just... *sniffle*

fleshflutter October 24 2007, 17:20:59 UTC

Oh that was brilliantly done! Awesome concept and really well delivered. :)

iamstealthyone October 25 2007, 20:06:32 UTC

Great companion piece to the one with Jo. Again, you’ve done a good job mixing the humor and the hurt. I especially like how, early on, Dean keeps on talking about the underwear as Sam’s telling him he didn’t find a way out of the deal. Dean would totally do that, try to skirt the issue as long as possible.

Favorite lines:

He looks about twelve. If, y’know, he was a twelve-year old giant.

*snickers*

“They had a banner.”

“Yep.”

“They had a song.”

“Yep.”

LOL!

the hard black sky stamped with stars.

Great description.

Dean. Please. Tell me this isn’t it.

Oh, Sam.

Dean looks at Sam, sees the boy he fought with and plotted with and raised, and the man he became.

Nicely phrased.

But Dean slides a hand along Sam’s shoulders and pulls him close. Sam bends his head, and his tears fall against Dean’s neck.

Oh, boys.

“I stole Amy Henderson’s panties.” The Impala doesn’t talk back. Sam thinks maybe her soul has gone. But he thinks he’ll keep talking to her anyway.

Lovely and aching.

*hugs Sam and the Impala*