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Hi. I've been sitting on this since I submitted it (as I, foolishly, promised you I wouldn't keep pestering you with 'oh hey I changed this can I resubmit?' emails), but I changed Simone and Fabio's final lines to make it make more sense. Could you, therefore, please change
'Of course we are-you're in there, too!' beamed Simone. 'He did me first, naturally,' bounced Fabio.
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'Of course we are-we all are! Even you,' beamed Simone. 'We're all on the wall, too. You're always easy to place, look!' bounced Fabio.'
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'Of course we are-you're in there, too!' beamed Simone.
'He did me first, naturally,' bounced Fabio.
to
'Of course we are-we all are! Even you,' beamed Simone.
'We're all on the wall, too. You're always easy to place, look!' bounced Fabio.'
Thank you! <3
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