Whenever I am depressed, I spout fic ^^;

[chaineddove]

Title: Past Precedence
Fandom: Lawful Drug/xxxHoLic
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Angst/romance
Pairings: Underlying Rikuou/Kazahaya, but also Kei/Kazahaya, Rikuou/Tsukiko, and Saiga/Kakei (please don't be scared ^^;)
Wordcount: 3,680
Description: Three converging pasts, and the future chosen.
Disclaimer: I do not own any CLAMP works. Not even MKR, which

Comments

[stillskies]

::is trying to think coherently enough to comment::

I like this. The Kakei and Saiga part amused me, but then you already knew this.

The ending... Well. I'm not quite sure what to think. I think it's very complimentary to the rest of the triptychs. I do feel horrid for Kazahaya though.

Very depressing. Very good. As your depressing fics are wont to be. :P

/attempt at coherency

fja;dkl ♥♥♥

[chaineddove]

I have depressed Sherri; my work here is done!

No, seriously, thanks. It's nice to know that my explosions of negative emotion are at least capable of yielding art. And as for Kazahaya? Yes. I feel so bad for him, you can probably barely imagine. I wish it could turn out different... but the ending... fits. You know?

~♥

[catwoman7018]

Wow. This is really good. It has a great voice to it. I like this structure. Art sprung from emotion can be the best if the creator can use it well. Good job.

[chaineddove]

Thank you, lovely ^_^.

One of these days, my depression will flood the earth with angst!fic, seriously. But it's a good release, for now.

[stormbringer246]

Woah.... You have not only made a stupidly beautiful fic with a stupidly haunting song, but have also managed to make me feel somewhat sedated and kinda a drugged feeling (the type of feeling you get after going through a haunted house with all the smoke and flashing lights where you have a mind out of body experiance).

If you ever want any fan art for somthing just ask and I will try to make time to make it for you! Also, give me a pairing or a character you want for a gift-art for the holidays! ^__^-

[chaineddove]

Stupidly beautiful? That's a new one, I like it XD Yay for sedation, because if the fic managed to make you feel drugged, it has indeed done its job well.

FANART, ALWAYS! You know this.

[stormbringer246]

stupidly beautiful is better than horrible beautiful (my Theatre teacher actually used that to explain one of our formal events for the end of the year)

[chaineddove]

*giggles* I can take that.

[heartscientist]

Oh, my heart.

I've only ever read one volume of Legal Drug so I have a feeling I'm missing some back story here, and that STILL socked me straight in the chest.

This is absolutely beautifully written, and it feels like Legal Drug and it feels like Holic and it feels like them together. The words kind of move the same way the art in the manga does, if that makes sense? It probably doesn't. I mean, all those hazy sequences with black smoke curling everywhere and the way everything is so elaborate, you replicated it here with your prose.

[chaineddove]

The twins locked in their own private world, the hopless sibling complexes, the complicated, fateful ties around all of the characters, practically tangible... oh, Lawful Drug, it must be read. And this is sure not to be my last foray into these fandoms. Because the supernatural/horror/altogether bizarre oddness absolutely WINS.

And what a spectacular compliment, comparing the writing to the art I love so much. You just made me feel all warm inside ^_^.

[aziraphale_mel]

fantastic. i am just blown off my feet. i have no words for this fic, it is ten thousand miles of brilliance and just whoa *________*

[chaineddove]

Wow, thanks! It's always so nice to have someone new discover my stuff. Particularly when it's something like this, that I spent an entire day breaking my brain over ^^;;; Thanks very much, and I hope you keep reading! I'm sure to hit these fandoms again, and hard. They suit me ^_^.