Comments | chaineddove: Challenge #8. I did it again!

chaineddove

Challenge #8. I did it again!

Mar 07, 2006 12:59

Challenge number 8! I'm doing good!

Fandom: DNAngel
Challenge: Opposites, tired, sunglasses
Challenger: slytherinblack

Title: Opposites Attract
Genre: Introspective, sort of angsty... thing
Rating: PG? Maybe G?
Pairings: Krad/Dark implications. Make up your own minds about Satoshi and Daisuke.
Wordcount: 521
Description: Two short first person narratives... ( Read more... )

dnangel, fic, weekly challenge

Comments 12

pixisity March 7 2006, 20:18:30 UTC

*giggles*

Yami no Matsuei : Spring, insanity, redemption

etrangere March 7 2006, 20:47:21 UTC

Very nice !

chaineddove March 7 2006, 23:20:35 UTC

O.O Wow, I got the elusive Anne-Elisa to read something, and it wasn't even one of my better works ^^;;;;

etrangere March 7 2006, 23:25:28 UTC

But it was short and I was home and you'd made me want to read about those two with our conversation the other day XD

chaineddove March 8 2006, 02:24:50 UTC

*lol* Well, whenever the smutty one comes out, I'll ping you *LOL*

ambrosewulf March 7 2006, 21:16:51 UTC

Oh wow. *purrr* I so love Dark and Krad, but you knew this already. ~_^
Hehhe. Poor Daisuke. He's so fraggin tormented. *pets on him*

Good moment and narration.

chaineddove March 7 2006, 23:19:34 UTC

You can't go wrong with these two, in my opinion. They're so... so... just... yes *purr* And Daisuke's next line is "He'll either kill me, or eat me for dinner *shudder*"

*giggle*

overload March 8 2006, 01:29:06 UTC

o.o Wow! Yet again, I'm loving your writing. You've pulled off the challenge wonderfully! *congratulates*

she_universe April 9 2007, 14:33:42 UTC

for before i slip off to, yknow, accomplish something...(aside from getting 'round to replying to everything i've lurked)

i like how krad and dark and shown to be opposites as well told, like how krad almost craves the clashes, wants to destroy dark in some sort of sickly obsessive way he's got (wanting to have dark and satoshi belong to him) but dark wants to look away and comfort even though he's supposed to be unflappable.

(and clearly isn't.)

but i kind of really just like this anyway, because it just flows nicely, like all your work.

chaineddove April 10 2007, 02:23:59 UTC

I love the idea of Dark and Krad, of them being like fitted puzzle pieces to each other, except there being too much warped magic in the way for them to actually get close enough to see the way the edges fit. man, I had so many fic ideas for this pairing at one point. Maybe I'll write them, though I've kind of wandered away from this fandom now...

she_universe April 10 2007, 04:42:11 UTC

It's completely true, the overlapping craziness the two of them have and i just woke up now which is my excuse for not having been able to go onto aim which is annoying

mainly is just kind of constantly surprises me how easily you can slide between fandoms. meaning i spent a few breaks today rereading shooting stars because i missed it and now completely hung over tohma/eiri and incredibly destructive tohma/ryu that it just sort of strikes me how well you can can into these things.

she_universe April 10 2007, 05:02:59 UTC

and i think it took me too long to realize why i like all your writing. well, another reason. i had to get further in my SS reread.

i cannot hate anyone. you have such a way--you make characters so real that even if i wanted to there is no one to hate and it's heartbreaking because it's like life, beautifully dirty and cruel and awful and makes you (well, me) stick to the stomach but drawn back, moth to the fire, back into that spiral you have of this destruction and i think it's beautiful.

...which would make sense if it hadn't come to me in the middle to transcribing technical economic jargon.