[Fic] Caress Me With Pain (oneshot)

Jun 27, 2017 00:34

Title: Caress Me WIth Pain
Pairing: Kyomoto Taiga/Shirota Yu
Rating: R for violence and blood
Genre: Vampire AU, Angst, Tragedy, Death (sort of?)
Disclaimer: Nope, not owning them, and I'm really sad about this
Warnings: Vampires, which means biting and blood...also, death
Summary: Once he invites him in, there is no turning back.
A/N: Let me be ( Read more... )

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stormy1990 June 27 2017, 11:14:50 UTC
OMG, I don't know what to say...let me take a deep breath first and...AH SCREW THE DEEP BREATH! I LOVE YOU GIRL!!! HOLY SHIT WHAT AN AWESOME FIC AND CONSIDERING THAT YOU DON'T LIKE VAMPIRE FICS THIS IS EVEN BETTER, BECAUSE YOU DID SUCH A GOOD JOB!!!

I loved the whole atmosphere between them! The whole struggle between ppl tell him to stay away and he himself is already way too far gone and accept everything that is coming, whuaaaaa~~~~ god damnit Yu as a vampire WITH SILVER LONG HAIR is the BEST THING EVER!!!

-Crying for mercy would just earn him a scoff, a mocking laughter, and more kissing-
THEN CRY YOU IDIOT, MORE KISSES ARE ALWAYS GOOD :P

-“You know, there are some of our kind who have more color in their cheeks than you do…”-
LOL I guess all (not existing) vampires on this planet are agreeing on this X'D

-eyeing him with a look that would definitely grant him access to the nearest mental hospital if he was human-
*bows to that perfect description of Death, whups I meant Vampire* :P

“For being careless? You don’t wanna know.”
ARGH SO MANY FEELINGS!!! You know how much I wanted to hit Taiga for being careless? But Shirota on the other hand...sure with Taiga's blood being that sweet and everything he might have liked to keep him human, but then there would be no "forever" for those two together and thinking of that he definitely dances in silence that he finally got a reason to turn Taiga :P

-watching the man through his long eyelashes-
You know, exactly those small details are what I love so much! It feels like a reminder yelling at me: REMEMBER HOW BEAUTIFUL HE IS!!! XD

-Sometimes, it’s rough and hasty, sometimes Shirota takes it surprisingly slow. Sometimes, there is biting, sometimes there’s not.-
You know how much I want to yell DETAILS PLEASE now? X'D

And Juri showing up as the "guest appearance" lol loved that XD now he lost his best friend though T__T but when ppl knew of Shirota I guess Taiga could at least show up in front of him and tell him what happened even though Juri would hit him for being reckless X'D

But I honestly didn't see the end coming >.> I was really surprised when I started reading the scene, bc I was like oh okay he got in a fight, oh okay he his bleeding, oh...DAFUQ WHAT HE WILL DIE???? BUT of course we have Shirota there whenever we need him (and a small part of me feels like he was watching and waiting, bc he wanted to turn him after all, but needed a good reason to do so :P *chrm* okay sorry got carried away with my thoughts, ignore me XD)

And when Taiga woke up as a vampire, ahhhhh I can imagine him so good *___* the kiss feeling even and wanting to hunt, =)&=%U) ?VU*$?=OÜ CAN I GET A TAIGA VAMPIRE ON THE HUNT SEQUEL?

So once again I can just say THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU over and over again! This was an amazing story and I will never be able to think about Elisabeth without thinking of them as vampires XD

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chained_akame June 27 2017, 13:01:17 UTC
I DON'T KNOW WHAT CAME OVER ME, I WANTED TO WRITE YOU SOMETHING, AND I DIDN'T KNOW WHAT, AND THEN I REMEMBERED HOW WE WERE TALKING ABOUT THIS AND BOOM! IT HAPPENED XD

I was wondering whether I should write Shirota with his hair or go for the Death style, and well...he's a vampire, so the silver hair suited him better *grin*

Somewhere along the way, he started getting addicted to more than Taiga's blood, so instead of losing him once and for all...why not turn him? ;)

you can pretty much imagine the details, I'm sure...Taiga is always involved whenever there's biting!

I will be honest, I thought of ending the scene with Taiga dropping by Juri's and getting a taste of him, but then I decided not to XD

DON'T TALK TO ME ABOUT SEQUELS, I'M EASY TO CONVINCE XDDD

THANK YOU for this comment, and I am soooo relieved you liked it *___*

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