She had brought two cups of tea.

Dec 03, 2004 21:58

Series: Hikaru no Go
Title: Distance
Author: spiritore
Rating: G
Word Count: 396

She had brought two cups of tea. )

pairing type: het, rated: g, series: hikaru no go, source type: animanga, author: feather_down

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lady_addiction December 4 2004, 00:45:35 UTC
sniffsniff...poor Akari...

loved the last line!

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feather_down December 5 2004, 05:39:40 UTC
I'm really an Akira/Hikaru fan, but something from Akari's POV was begging to be written. I had two endings in mind when I wrote it and this one ended up being more suitable for it. Thanks!

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ravenel December 4 2004, 03:14:52 UTC
Well, okay. I was waiting for something like this so -- Finally ! XD (I'm sorry, I'm trying to find more words to say, but my mind's whacked at the moment. >_<; so..) I like it.

May I do the next?

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Yes, you claimed! yukitsu December 4 2004, 05:58:17 UTC
>D >D >D

Drabble was sad. o.o
I have no idea who the girl is... .-. but poor her. (Nuu! Yaoi first!)

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Re: Yes, you claimed! feather_down December 5 2004, 05:46:53 UTC
I take it you're not familiar with Hikaru no Go?

Akari's one of the main characters oldest friends and she rarely gets the attention I think she deserves in fanfiction.

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Re: Yes, you claimed! yukitsu December 5 2004, 06:40:00 UTC
Ah. I see. Reminds me of characters like... Kuwabara from YYH.

Nuu! Yaoi first ! (Kidding~)

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feather_down December 5 2004, 05:54:00 UTC
I had quite a bit of fun writing this at her expense. ^^; At least there are other guys out there waiting for her. Like Mitani.

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hyourinmaru December 5 2004, 02:06:33 UTC
Ack, too late to claim >__<

This drabble was awesome. It's cool how Akari seems to accept that Hikaru may never think of her as she thinks of him. If I'm not mistaken, this drabbles seems to lean towards the Hikaru/Touya pairing, yes? I'm more of a Hikaru/Akari fan though *gets pummeled to the ground by Hikaru/Touya fangirls*

Do you mind if I use the last line in the context of what I'm going to write? Not for this challenge though, just a little drabble for a friend ^^;;

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feather_down December 5 2004, 06:08:18 UTC
I've never seen her as one to ignore or fight what's right in front of her. And yes, it's definately leaning in the Akira/Hikaru direction. I have a hard time pairing Akari with Hikaru for several reasons. One, he's really not good enough for her. He's more focused on the Go world and being Touya's rival and while Akari's there, she's on the fringes. Second, somewhere at the beginning of the middle of the series (there's a mouthful) Akari's own actions led me to believe that she only sees Hikaru as a friend. In the beginning I would definately say she has a crush on him, but in the anime at episode 27? -- I've forgotten what chapter it is in the manga -- when she tells Hikaru to go away and not return to the Go club because it might give Mitani reason not to come back struck me as the point where it was evident she was no longer interested in him that way.

Of course, it won't stop me from writing the Hikaru/Akari fic I've been promising myself I would. ^_^

Have at it all you like.

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hyourinmaru December 5 2004, 07:36:41 UTC
True, though I have the graduation scene stuck in my mind. Dunno what chapter it is in the manga... I don't watch the anime so I don't know about that either ^^;;

Write away ~ and uh, thank you for letting me use that line ^___^

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perseid February 26 2005, 17:12:28 UTC
very bittersweet. poor Akari. =(

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