Fic: You Forgave, and I Won't Forget (8/20)

Apr 11, 2015 00:14

Title: You Forgave, and I Won't Forget
Author: cgkm2099z
Pairing: Jeff/Annie
Spoilers: S5
Rating: PG-13
Warning Language
Word Count: 4,714
Disclaimer: I do not own Community. Community, and its characters, are the creation of the great Dan Harmon. I think it's still owned by Sony Pictures Television, but after the hack, I'm not so sure. The title ( Read more... )

jeff winger, community, jeff/annie, fanfiction, annie edison

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cgkm2099z April 14 2015, 13:26:10 UTC
Ugh, Simmons. Nice twist though, I don't think anybody saw it coming!!

I did drop a hint. The whirring noise Jeff heard was Simmons' wheelchair. It couldn't have been Alan though, because Alan was another defense attorney, not a prosecutor. And yes, ugh, Simmons. I can't believe that they had planned to have Annie date him in season 2. They decided against it when they realized how well the Jeff/Annie thing was going and used that instead. Sooooo glad that they didn't have her date Simmons. Just one more reason to be thankful for the Alison/Joel chemistry.

Also I really want to hug Annie right now in celebration that was freaking awesome. Especially her closing remark to Simmons.

Annie tried to take the high road and walk away, but Simmons wouldn't let her. You mess with the bull, you get the horns :-)

So Annie and Jeff are teaming up as hotshot lawyers???

You didn't expect Annie to just sit on the sidelines did you? She's not an actual lawyer, so Jeff will have to do the courtroom stuff, but they can prepare and get stress headaches together :-)

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loveobsessed999 April 14 2015, 19:46:15 UTC
I did drop a hint. The whirring noise Jeff heard was Simmons' wheelchair. It couldn't have been Alan though, because Alan was another defense attorney, not a prosecutor. And yes, ugh, Simmons. I can't believe that they had planned to have Annie date him in season 2. They decided against it when they realized how well the Jeff/Annie thing was going and used that instead. Sooooo glad that they didn't have her date Simmons. Just one more reason to be thankful for the Alison/Joel chemistry.

. . . Okay I completely missed that hint. I think I just want Annie to punch Alan lol. Simmons really was genius to put in here though, because it makes PERFECT SENSE. I'm sooooooooooooooo glad she didn't date him. I think it would just be weird because he has a tendency to call her 'little Annie adderall' and I don't think she could date anyone who would do that. Also Alison and Joel have too much chemistry to not utilize it.

Annie tried to take the high road and walk away, but Simmons wouldn't let her. You mess with the bull, you get the horns :-)

Can Simmons mess with the bull more often? I like Annie's horns!!

You didn't expect Annie to just sit on the sidelines did you? She's not an actual lawyer, so Jeff will have to do the courtroom stuff, but they can prepare and get stress headaches together :-)

Well you know, a massage from the person you love is really helpful when dealing with stress headaches ;). Just saying . . .

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cgkm2099z April 14 2015, 21:22:50 UTC
I'm sooooooooooooooo glad she didn't date him. I think it would just be weird because he has a tendency to call her 'little Annie adderall' and I don't think she could date anyone who would do that.

The idea was that he drove her nuts, but was so charismatic that she was drawn in. Like "ARRGH I hate him, but..." You an see what they were going for in the part where Jeff tells her to go off book. The way she says "Simmons is so good at using his inherent magnetism to sell his points..." I picked up on that the first time I watched it and was like "Wtf, she doesn't actually like that guy does she?!" I hate it when shows have girls like Annie date guys who treat them like crap, which is what Simmons would do.

Can Simmons mess with the bull more often? I like Annie's horns!!

Haha, we'll see. I know big picture where I want it to go. Something like that would have to fit it organically. I certainly wouldn't avoid it if it made sense though :)

Well you know, a massage from the person you love is really helpful when dealing with stress headaches ;). Just saying . . .

Scandalous! How could you suggest such a thing?

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loveobsessed999 April 14 2015, 22:35:12 UTC
The idea was that he drove her nuts, but was so charismatic that she was drawn in. Like "ARRGH I hate him, but..." You an see what they were going for in the part where Jeff tells her to go off book. The way she says "Simmons is so good at using his inherent magnetism to sell his points..." I picked up on that the first time I watched it and was like "Wtf, she doesn't actually like that guy does she?!" I hate it when shows have girls like Annie date guys who treat them like crap, which is what Simmons would do.

Ugh I know it's so annoying. Like just because they're young and optimistic doesn't mean their naive. I kind of picked up on the chemistry but Joel and Alison were so overwhelming I could never successfully buy it (thank goodness for that.)

Haha, we'll see. I know big picture where I want it to go. Something like that would have to fit it organically. I certainly wouldn't avoid it if it made sense though :)

I respect that. Seriously this story is so well written and most of that is because it all seems so organic, and a lot of the organicness is helped because you have the characters so spot on :).

Scandalous! How could you suggest such a thing?

I think I'm just saying what everyone who read that thought so . . . really it's your fault :P. As for how I could suggest that, well, I sat down at my computer and typed it out . . .

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